DemiseGE

I see… glossed over mention of school life n stuff being a primary focus of the story. I did read daichi’s character description b4 I started the story so I came in expecting not just focus on baseball itself, but just felt the pace of how their relationship progressed was a little too fast. Especially because it was so in contrast with the rest of the cast being more “blurry?”. I get the reasoning with the current teammates not being off much significance, and that’s fairs since you seem to be building the story up for high school baseball to be the true start since that’s when he’ll be back as the pitcher. Nothing against that, but it does make certain moments seem “isolated” like no teammate questioning why he’s no longer the ace or even a pitcher, andhim trying out for a different position. And yah, my opinion on the story would most likely be whole lot different in relation to a full arc, or volume. Now, it’ll be weird if I judged the whole book off that specific criticism in just the start of the book, but this is just my opinion on that specific moment(s)/ chapter.

Feels like this whole bromance is a ya too forced, so much that it’s clearly been the main plot of the story so far instead of the game itself. Would’ve been much better to do this slowly throughout a season instead of trying squeeze them together in order to get them ready as a future battery. And then the fact that other than the shortstop he doesn’t seem to have any real interaction with anyone else on the team even though he was their ace just the year prior? In the context of anyone who’s been on a team nothing really makes sense. Feels like the author’s purposely muted out the rest of the cast in order to force these two into a bromance first

I don’t know why he’s keeping this as such a big secret. Not letting the team know or even his father. Makes no sense. If anything since he was their ace and the prominent player on the team the year before he has a responsibility to address it instead of him teammates being confused. Much less the fact that he somehow thinks he can just go on without teammates knowing? Makes no sense at all…. Or even more than that the simple fact that somehow to get ready for tryouts he didn’t think to practice even simple fielding so much so that he didn’t know he could throw a ball properly to base?

Yah this would be the best. Even better if S+ isn’t just having great speed, but literally being the peak of that certain attebute and whatever level you play(or in a very close discussion for it). Most agile(prob a shortstop?) player in middle school baseball= S in agility

Demiurge’s jaldaboath persona is prob the closest thing to what I imagine the mc with his 3 upgrades. Claws, tail, and wings

But still Naruto’s only prob on the 3/5. If you consider worlds with lovecraftian themes

Naruto should be considered more dangerous the AoT. In AoT only two nations really were in danger of crqzy fights till the rumbling, and even that you could escape from and be refugees. In naruto every single person was one fight outcome away from becoming nutrition to a tree. And then there’s the fact that shinobi skirmishes happen constantly outside of that.

Yah that’s what I meant tho. A Yamamoto who has mastered his zampakuto and powers more that the version of him yhwach feared. But still not fully peaceful and with his killer instinct would be scary. And that was prob around the middle of the 1000 year period yhwach was sealed. Where he was committed to becoming stronger and hadn’t settled down to be peaceful yet.

Actually it’s infitismally close to zero, but never truly zero