A quick summary of the review: It is a very good novel with a good chance to become a "great novel", the plot is unpredictable, the world is very wide, it's readable and the characters are interesting ( Just think about the lich and the puppeteer...) I know that there are a lot of people that know how to write a review better than me but since there are only around 20 reviews on this novel I will try to write an accurate review for new readers... Let's start with the best and more interesting parts of the novel... World background and Story development! I must admit that this novel surprised me far more than I expected after reading the first chapters, besides, those surprises aren't something impossible to predict but at the same time, you won't be able to predict anything without understanding the characters' mindset. The world background is also unique, the author was surely inspired by other novels but it is also clear that the result is surprisingly great, I must say that I don't like post-apocalypse yet I enjoy this one a lot, if you like fantasy novels and you are searching for something new, then this one is the novel you are searching! There are a lot of sentients races like demons, elves, strange talking trees, beastmen, liches, and a lot more... I don't know yet if there are other groups of races like the dark race that contains every creature capable to use dark essence, ( like demons, liches, cursed moon cats, etc..) but if there are, it would be even more interesting since our MC's faction have something like "limitless potential"? Well, not that I care about balance, our MC must defy the heavens with something OP after all. Now, let's go on with the almost serious review! The character design is good with some little flows due to the inexperience of the author, but don't think that this is so bad! have you ever tried to write a novel? Well, if the answer is not then let me tell you something, it's hard, very hard... It's rare to find a new author that can fluently change the character's behavior. Well, our dear author failed a bit since it was a little forced but look at the bright side, he tried and I am confident that he will improve! After all, everyone learns from his own mistakes, for this reason, if you find some actions a little forced, don't drop the novel right away, give it a chance to impress you. Ok now, the main character isn't a mindless machine nor he is an honorable man with a normal mindset yet he is quite funny, I like his character, I don't know what other readers think about it but I can't help but smile and sometimes laugh more than usual while reading. And here we are... at the bottom of the review and the nemesis of our almighty author-sama... The writing quality... I know that there are a lot of novels with far more grammatical mistakes and I must admit that this one isn't too far from my bottom-line for grammatical mistakes yet it is readable and grammatical mistakes can always be fixed in the future, so don't lose hope, just pray that the author will somehow find some trustworthy proofreaders and everything will be perfect. Or that is what I always say to myself every time I find something that shouldn't exist... Well, if someone is reading my review until this point, congratulations! You have surpassed my expectations since usually no one read my reviews... Okay, now that you learned everything about the novel, go, spread your wings and read this novel! I hope you will enjoy it~

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This is a pretty accurate review considering the writing it terrible and feels like a copy paste translate and that many of the ratings are fake cause 10 5 stars for something j have a terrible time reading and understanding the most basic of sentences purely cause of miss typing let alone reuse of lazy and many others that define our MC like once or twice a paragraph. Man thiS was more of a rant but still holds true and there are other issues like character development and some other things But its to late for me but anyway the story is something i would not recommend

Dropped. The synopsis is great. Just the writing is unbearable. It makes ne lose brain cells. Despite that I continued until the first interaction in chapter 5 which makes me think that either the characters are retarded or the author is.

eyes go bleed from diz sheat grammar its awful kill it with fire and macaroni with fire logic here not work trash should be illigL gmgoWaygg

Although I have not really read that much of the story and have skipped most chapters, I still believe my review to be fair. From what I can tell so far, the story likes to make great leaps in logic that does not make any sense. Also the writing quality is pretty bad. I mean how come that the last sentence of every paragraph is missing the "." in every chapter so far?

The cover hooked me and the premise made me jump in, lurking me to read some epic story. Unfortunately, it was not the case. That first chapter killed it for me. The grammar and writing were terrible but I pushed through expecting some ameliorations or at least a main character that will help me struggle through the errors poking my eyes. I'm not saying the story is bad. The ideas are good but the execution is terrible. Dear author, please, don't give up. But I beg you to fix your writing.

Ooof, yeah no. The story seems like a good one but because of the misused tenses and bad punctuation and grammar just makes this a bit hard to read.

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