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Alright i can’t fkin take it anymore. I’ve read up to the current chapter 83 and while I enjoyed it at the start, the MC has some severe mental retardation and ADHD. He goes on and on about how he needs to be stronger and this and that to the point where *SPOILER* his parents die right in front of him. Instead of using his 2 bases FULL of resources to sit down and cultivate, he decides to wander the fking world and comes across another dungeon. He literally cant sit still at all to cultivate and icnreSe his power. He’s been given this holy grail of cultivation and skills and a body suited for cultivation but does NOTHING with it. It took him an entire year before he even decided to cultivate to start. Now, he keeps getting his butt handed to him by creatures a rank hogher than him but he does nothing to cultivate into the next rank. He has this faulty logic that somehow skills will make him stronger but the author goes on to prove how wrong that idea is because the gap between servant and noble rank creatures is, AND I QUOTE, “100times more pwoerful” and even a fraction of the aura these moble creatures let out just forces all servant ranks to kneel. they are completely helpless against it, so you’d think he’d focus on breaking theough to the next rank? Especially since he’s at the peak right before the next rank, right? NO he just cant fkin sit still and cultivate and power through the beginning phase of cultivation. The start of cultivation novels should always go quickly but the author spends so much time just absolutely wasted on pointless stuff when clearly personal power matters the most. idk man this novel has compeltely frustrated me and I think the author is ruining a good setup and world he built.he even gets saved not once not teice but 3 fking times bY this random godly chick with an umbrella and he’s forced into submission and frozen every time. He legit cant do anything and he’s being shown over and over that personal strength and power matters the most but he refuses to sit down and cultivate. StorY: 2/5 (Great premise but ruined by author with dumb decisions) Character: 0/5 (idiot MC that complains endlessly but does zero to improve perosnal power while having s golden spoon) Writing: 4/5 (decent grammer few mistakes) Plot: 3/5 (ruined by author with dumb decisions) Updates: 3/5 (1ch a day or every few days so it’s average and nothing special)

This is a pretty accurate review considering the writing it terrible and feels like a copy paste translate and that many of the ratings are fake cause 10 5 stars for something j have a terrible time reading and understanding the most basic of sentences purely cause of miss typing let alone reuse of lazy and many others that define our MC like once or twice a paragraph. Man thiS was more of a rant but still holds true and there are other issues like character development and some other things But its to late for me but anyway the story is something i would not recommend

Dropped. The synopsis is great. Just the writing is unbearable. It makes ne lose brain cells. Despite that I continued until the first interaction in chapter 5 which makes me think that either the characters are retarded or the author is.

eyes go bleed from diz sheat grammar its awful kill it with fire and macaroni with fire logic here not work trash should be illigL gmgoWaygg

Although I have not really read that much of the story and have skipped most chapters, I still believe my review to be fair. From what I can tell so far, the story likes to make great leaps in logic that does not make any sense. Also the writing quality is pretty bad. I mean how come that the last sentence of every paragraph is missing the "." in every chapter so far?

The cover hooked me and the premise made me jump in, lurking me to read some epic story. Unfortunately, it was not the case. That first chapter killed it for me. The grammar and writing were terrible but I pushed through expecting some ameliorations or at least a main character that will help me struggle through the errors poking my eyes. I'm not saying the story is bad. The ideas are good but the execution is terrible. Dear author, please, don't give up. But I beg you to fix your writing.

Ooof, yeah no. The story seems like a good one but because of the misused tenses and bad punctuation and grammar just makes this a bit hard to read.

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