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FanficMortal
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Author's shameless 5-star review. Some things about the story and plot, ~It's a One Piece fan-fic with good story building and strength progression from weak to strong. ~MC's strength will soar after a small time-skip which will be around the 70th chapter. ~There's a possibility of MC crossing to the Naruto realm. It's just my thought, I haven't planned it yet. ~There will be no harem. Happy Reading Everyone!!

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READER_45
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no harem i sure to read it

NullasAnms
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No Harem :( That is too sad. I will keep reading though.

Ryofu
RyofuLv11Ryofu

"~There will be no harem." Story not for me then.

Ryofu
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Don't forget to add the Tags corresponding (Weak to Strong, No Harem, ...), most people look if they find the Tags they want then the review before starting reading the chapters.

Zan_M
Zan_MLv3Zan_M

my mind keeps trying to find out how people read harem but I can't find the answer, I already liked the story because of the harem, I don't really enjoy traveling around the multiverse so I hope it doesn't happen

Zero_Akihira
Zero_AkihiraLv3Zero_Akihira

Yes! No harem... Keep going author-san and I think you should really include a new tags for people who wants to read this book...

Kurigohan
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Who mc pairing ?

FanficMortal
FanficMortalAuthorFanficMortal

Haven't decided yet. If possible I want to pair him with someone from the naruto-verse. If you have any good ideas, please share them. I will consider it. Thanks!

Kurigohan:Who mc pairing ?
Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv13Jasonenrick

Oh man, not This Naruto bullshit, please. Naruto is such a Bad Mc and Character. The whole Series makes no Sense. In One Piece, many good females weren't used in ANY Fanfic there is. Naruto-verse was truly ****ed by Webnovel, literally and metaphorically.

FanficMortal:Haven't decided yet. If possible I want to pair him with someone from the naruto-verse. If you have any good ideas, please share them. I will consider it. Thanks!
I_love_magic
I_love_magicLv10I_love_magic

Boa Hancock? Maybe that would be cool? Other than that i have no idea....

FanficMortal:Haven't decided yet. If possible I want to pair him with someone from the naruto-verse. If you have any good ideas, please share them. I will consider it. Thanks!
Book_seeker
Book_seekerLv13Book_seeker

one piece without harem is difficult

Ryofu:"~There will be no harem." Story not for me then.
JuSt_A
JuSt_ALv4JuSt_A

is this an original or translated novel??

FanficMortal
FanficMortalAuthorFanficMortal

Original!

JuSt_A:is this an original or translated novel??
JuSt_A
JuSt_ALv4JuSt_A

cool👍👍

FanficMortal:Original!
BOI_o_boi
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If you're looking to pair with someone from the Naruto verse there is Mei Terumi, Tsunade, Konan, Ino, Temari, Shizune, Karin,and maybe even Kaguya. Oh, I forgot Cherry Blossoms.

FanficMortal:Haven't decided yet. If possible I want to pair him with someone from the naruto-verse. If you have any good ideas, please share them. I will consider it. Thanks!
Kyubikn
KyubiknLv4Kyubikn

no harem on a story where there is shit tons of possible love interests🙃

Kr0n
Kr0nLv11Kr0n

no cross-over. pls

TianGuez
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Sad ? A no Harem, Hallelujah.

NullasAnms:No Harem :( That is too sad. I will keep reading though.
TianGuez
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La mitad de los pjs femeninos estan mal escritos hasta la medula como Ino, Tsunade, Karin, etc La unica bien escrita seria Tamari, pero preferiria que se quedara con un personaje secundario de OP, al fin y al cabo OP esta mejor escrita que naruto PD: Naruto es parte de mi infancia pero hay que saber ver sus Carencias y una de esas son las Parejas, en parte por los pocos buenos personajes femenisnos. Hinata es pobre, sakura nunca supero su Romance de adolecente, Ino la chica "no tengo a sasuke pero sai tambien es guapo", Tsunade la Sanin no quiero ser Hokage pero lo hare de igualmanera. Ten ten y Tamari son por lejos los mejores pjs femeninos.

BOI_o_boi:If you're looking to pair with someone from the Naruto verse there is Mei Terumi, Tsunade, Konan, Ino, Temari, Shizune, Karin,and maybe even Kaguya. Oh, I forgot Cherry Blossoms.
TianGuez
TianGuezLv2TianGuez

I have seen more works get lost by a Harem than by an individual romance, the authors of Harems end up losing their focus by trying to make the protagonist increase his Harem without any sense, Endless path is a good example of what I mean, The protagonist stayed with almost all the women of the world of danmachi but it did not pass the first Boos in 300 chapters, when the author said that he was going to cross worlds and dominate them, but it ended up being just another novel getting lost in the mud of the harem.

Book_seeker:one piece without harem is difficult
Book_seeker
Book_seekerLv13Book_seeker

mindlessly accepting every woman is a huge turn off, but keeping it like 3 or 2 is best. I like books that have harem but does not make it the main point of the book. Try holyjoker books

TianGuez:I have seen more works get lost by a Harem than by an individual romance, the authors of Harems end up losing their focus by trying to make the protagonist increase his Harem without any sense, Endless path is a good example of what I mean, The protagonist stayed with almost all the women of the world of danmachi but it did not pass the first Boos in 300 chapters, when the author said that he was going to cross worlds and dominate them, but it ended up being just another novel getting lost in the mud of the harem.