this infact maybe a good book, but seeing jun tianyun on every passing paragraph is annoying as fuck. we all know what his name is so u don't have to say it in full every single time. just imagine you are talking with your friend and everytime u mention your friends name (which u do a lot) u address them with their full name....like Leonardo DiCaprio do u like tea?, Leonardo DiCaprio how was your day?, Leonardo DiCaprio u look good today...u get what I mena

fair enough I guess

so will he let out his secrets open to anyone? the first girl , his sister, mother... not that it's bad but takes away the element of mystery from the story

tho I was super freakin disappointed with later chapters of how shun lost every single game, you've proven yourself to be a good writer. so will try your new fic for sure, hopefully it won't end in a similar fashion to your knb fic.

man I love this more every passing chapters!!

this is a prime example of a dumbass writing a fanfic without understanding anything about the series. my guess is that this author didn't even finish watching avatar, and wrote his story based on Wikipedia instead. I wish I could rate it lower but sadly 1 star is the limit.

really hate it when authors pull the rewrite card 🙄 But welp, it's your work...good luck with the next one

60... sheesh...I couldn't read it past 10 😬

I'm so lost @.@

stable updater or randomly?

probably crash and die ...smh. *pats* it's okay to be pathetic. cheers😊

will there be regular updates or is it random?

is this why I've been single this whole time🤧🤧

nee? O.O did I miss something?

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normally I would cuss out if a MC was this overbearing to a girl but then again he is a supposed villain so it works I guess. keep up the good work. cheers

bro u dead?

is this the route MC will be taking from now onwards? arrogant as fk even when he realizes that he is the wrong one? completely and utterly disappointed

the time skips in this novel is crazy

ye boy..