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Evil_Dragon
Evil_DragonAuthor4yr
2020-08-15 22:24

A shameless review from the author here. Just here to tell you that the novel is gonna be pretty long. It's gonna be a harem but not from the start. MC gonna be smart, manipulative, maybe evil in some regards. I have tried to keep the relationships as normal as possible. Hopefully, you ignore a few things here and there. I will try to keep the grammar decent...

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_GoldenKing_
_GoldenKing_Lv5

I hope so!

Monarch_Y2MJ
Monarch_Y2MJLv4

Hello Author-san! Just wanted to wish you good luck and ask you if you can finish this novel??? Because there's another fan-fic of ATG that's still ongoing and I'm an impatient man.✋😅

Monarch_Y2MJ
Monarch_Y2MJLv4

Hello Author-san! Just wanted to wish you good luck and ask you if you can finish this novel??? Because there's another fan-fic of ATG that's still ongoing and I'm an impatient man.✋😅

JoJo_Soni
JoJo_SoniLv4

Thanks you for this amazing MC and amazing fanfic. Also I can't explain how glad I am that this fanfic will be longer than you previous work. I just hope that you don't drop it like previous ATG fanfic(I also wish to see it's conclusion if possible specially when it was so close to end). Otherwise I feel like this is could be the best fanfic in general and not only ATG

KratosFarlier
KratosFarlierLv4

Yes please! Just need more chapters....alot more

Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

Best ATG so far!!!!! Love the blend of a Star-realm hero and Earthling!!!!!

Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

Oh by the way author what will his bone age be for testing if he were to join a school or tournament??? It is iffy since his old body was technically dead and everything about his being changed. Or did the mirror of Simsara give him the age of YC?

Evil_Dragon
Evil_DragonAuthor

His bone age is the same as that of xisu. it will be changed by the spirit of the phoenix.

Harem_fan:Oh by the way author what will his bone age be for testing if he were to join a school or tournament??? It is iffy since his old body was technically dead and everything about his being changed. Or did the mirror of Simsara give him the age of YC?
Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

Thanks it would have stopped a lot of story potential, like the water orb. So it must be a phoenix re-birth! Love the MC concept.

Evil_Dragon:His bone age is the same as that of xisu. it will be changed by the spirit of the phoenix.
Legendary_Person
Legendary_PersonLv5

Is this another ATG novel where Mc goes after the female lead into his harem? I want something new so I gotta ask before I read.

Grenhaer
GrenhaerLv4

I haven't started yet, but I'm thinking of reading it. I hope he won't be a rag? (after connecting souls with a cultivator, he definitely should not be afraid of murder, coltevators have a strong mentality, they can cut out all the seed and the planet.

Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

Afraid of murder..oh hell no spoiler..he snuffed the **** out of a well know cannon character..haha.

Grenhaer:I haven't started yet, but I'm thinking of reading it. I hope he won't be a rag? (after connecting souls with a cultivator, he definitely should not be afraid of murder, coltevators have a strong mentality, they can cut out all the seed and the planet.
Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

Author by the way...On Earth did he have any female characters from ATG he had a weeb crush on? For example if I were put in ATG I would give any thing to meet and be with Mu Xuanyin. So is there any he is exited to meet in his path?

newthings
newthingsLv6

whos the mc? Yang Tian'? or Star god?

Evil_Dragon:His bone age is the same as that of xisu. it will be changed by the spirit of the phoenix.
Evil_Dragon
Evil_DragonAuthor

Yant Tian

newthings:whos the mc? Yang Tian'? or Star god?
noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv14

Ty 😘😘

Shoallan
ShoallanLv5

I'm curious man, are you ever going to finish your other novels before starting a new one?

Evil_Dragon
Evil_DragonAuthor

Finished my naruto fanfic xD

Shoallan:I'm curious man, are you ever going to finish your other novels before starting a new one?
Ancient_Reader
Ancient_ReaderLv6

How many in the harem? 2?...3? :\

HeartRend
HeartRendLv6

Great novel! I just have a quick question. How long is the first Volume going to be, i.e. how many chapters?

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darkimortal
darkimortalLv6
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

Look as a FF writer u deserve 5 stars cause of ur writing but ur stories...I will not lie, I've enjoyed each one [ the DD, AGT and naruto FF's] before I dropped cause.. -ur stories all have MC do **** cause of plot...whether its getting chicks or becoming stronger. And its bland as fk -And offense but ur romance is forced,,,the DD FF, that was messed up and rushed [ in relationships]. There was no moments of romance, nothing built and ur MC was more or less the 3rd wheel in that FF, most of the story that dude just being with the main cast....no world exploration, nothing [atleast till where I read C43]...u should explore and add ****. -Ur AGT FF...that MC is the generic AGT FF MC...meaning,,,MC is a show off retard, gets chick cause he is good looking and gains their interest, they barely have a personality...and its all forced by plot...MC has knowledge about everything, but he barely does **** and whatever he does, theres no consequences. Why? He MC. The amount times he should've been killed cause of what he did in the AGT ff is practically limitless. but nope, he protected by plot. and he more or less follows what the OG yun che did and despite what he does there are not many changes -Ur OG bk, MC was a rapist -Naruto FF...MC is protected by plot and kinda weak [ironic cause others bk MC was OP and yet they didnt do ****],,,and somethings like *cough* *tsunade* seemed forced... --------------------- Look i am not bashing u, or saying u ****...cause u not..people like ur ****, I did to BUT there are some ****ty things in ur bk. So...I , long time reader and some what of a fan, request u to avoid doing what u've done.. Dont make MC a show off retard, use brains and do ****. Think, plan, u say manipulative MC, but more often MC just barely tricks a chick, he moreless just lies to em...dont do this...make MC plan, be smart, think and dont show off, hide power....add new ****, rather than following cannon. and the love interests..dont make em useless fk toys like in AGT FF....give em a better personality [but not the cliche arrogant young miss that falls for strong MC in 2 chps]...take **** slow, and make MC use his brains. And dont force romance, take it slow. anyway, my rant is over. GL

Izanmi
IzanmiLv4
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