Item: Dark Rebirth (An ATG Fanfic)
Rating: 2.2
Author: LUGAL_KUG_GA

LUGAL_KUG_GALv33yr

2022-02-23 21:22

the story has a high potential if the author just played it right. but things just came crashing down starting on the part where he contradicted himself about about not wanting to sully xisu's body. I don't know what the author decided the mc personality to be. but to me the mc is like a 13 year old boy ongoing a rebellious phase except he was given power and being fed with godlyspoon and thinks that he is the most miserable person in existence and being hypocritical yet wanted everything.... respond if you think I am wrong. I am open for discussion, just make sure you get your point clear.

Dark Rebirth (An ATG Fanfic)

Evil_Dragon

4.5

288 Chs

Liked by 8 people

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LUGAL_KUG_GALv3

I just saw the tags....highiq? where the confidence come from?

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