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Damn this Chamelos is quite cute
Ty for chap
Ty for the chap. Feels a tiny bit drawn out, but still nice. Hopefully wraps up in next chapter.
Thanks for the update! Awesome to see the revision in the previous chap
Thanks for chap... but cringe
Did the editor give up half way through the chapter? Puncuation, grammer, Capital lettering, etc, all suddenly fell off in like the 4th paragraph for some reason. It reads like machine translate now.
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Thanks for the chapter, but this reads like machine transation. Recommend a proof read, either in gramerly or using AI.
Grammer in this chapter is really bad - recommend a re-read and proof read to make it flow better.
Meh... started off decent and interesting with the way he was unlocking his powers. Quickly went downhill for me due to the number of crossover elements. When the damn Decepticons somehow came into play i lost it lol.