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JP_TransLaLa
JP_TransLaLaLv24yr
2020-08-16 21:17

A promising start: you can feel the terror right at the start, and I loved the genre-aware buddy who made sure that the protagonist didn't have an unfortunate encounter with Truck-kun a little too soon!

How far would you go for a wish? (Ver.0)

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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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The introduction is nice! I just got confused about the description of the character and the surroundings but the plot is clear. I can see what you're trying to show in the first chap! Good job!

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The work was great. The prologues happen to be interesting than I thought. The use of words was awesome and the book has great potential, Keep writing I'm sure you would be an awesome author! [img=update]

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It had me confused about what to feel... first it was warm and then the next it was depressing... your way with words did a roller coaster to my mind. I also find the starting prologues to be interesting and it keeps me in wonder what more if the story begins in the next chapters. Thanks and Good luck author 🤗

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TheSuccessor
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Quite one of a book, I thought it was sad, to me. And not because of the story, but because of the writing. The author gives a very sad and dark tone to the story, which makes me think it was sad. The feeling sad, not the bad one.

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From the beginning chapters to the latest chapter had already grabbed my attention. Its background has me hooked. I can not wait to see what he happens next.

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From beginning until the latest chapter the book was attention grabbing. The writing style is great, as well... I also love how you make the "author notes" I actually took a look back in the second chapter again 😅😅. I am looking forward to seeing more chapters and seeing where everything goes. Keep it up.

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raima_alam
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This story is great, I think you have great capability as a writer. I only read the prologue and found no errors. Keep up the good work and I honestly think this book should get more ratings.

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ShadowPrincess96
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Though it's only a prologue but your capacity as a writer is clearly visible❤️ I am sure this will be a potential novel indeed! I liked the start so much! Hope to get more good chapters coming soon 😊 Keep it up❤️❤️

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