Item: How far would you go for a wish? (Ver.0)
Rating: 4.8
Author: shaznalye06

shaznalye06Lv14yr

2020-09-03 13:02

The work was great. The prologues happen to be interesting than I thought. The use of words was awesome and the book has great potential, Keep writing I'm sure you would be an awesome author! [img=update]

How far would you go for a wish? (Ver.0)

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