Item: Eye System
Rating: 5
Author: Adam_A

Adam_AAuthor4yr

2020-11-16 20:47

Another Shameless review, but this time I come with important news. 1) I opened a server. Discord Server: https://discord.gg/TtnGfdKanr 2) The novel is being edited and will be improved when I get time to go back to it

Eye System

Adam_A

4.7

269 Chs

Liked by 25 people

Replies26

MelshanLv7

The MC Will have a girlfriend/wife or harém?

4yr

King_of_TomatoesLv11

wife.

Melshan:The MC Will have a girlfriend/wife or harém?

4yr

ShadewindLv6

You sure

King_of_Tomatoes:wife.

4yr

King_of_TomatoesLv11

yes according to author, though she is far more powerful so mc has to catch and she has a unique background plus the romance is quite early

Shadewind:You sure

4yr

Xander_Pascua_3964Lv2

Anyone else notice that the cover is Sasuke's Mangekyo Sharingan?

4yr

Cloud_Bat_X27Lv13

at the very bottom of the plot summary the author wrote "p.s. I don't own the picture on the cover.

Xander_Pascua_3964:Anyone else notice that the cover is Sasuke's Mangekyo Sharingan?

4yr

DoxombreLv4

Are you telling me there's no harem, cause I'm seriously hoping.

King_of_Tomatoes:wife.

4yr

King_of_TomatoesLv11

yes no harm according to author

Doxombre:Are you telling me there's no harem, cause I'm seriously hoping.

4yr

StarvationLv10

Why tho

Doxombre:Are you telling me there's no harem, cause I'm seriously hoping.

4yr

DoxombreLv4

You don't understand how many harems plot I've read from anime, manga, novels. I'm so sick of it, I need a break. So, I look for no harems, which is utterly difficult.

Starvation:Why tho

4yr

StarvationLv10

I agree with you, i also look for a normal relationship, perhaps a power couple.

Doxombre:You don't understand how many harems plot I've read from anime, manga, novels. I'm so sick of it, I need a break. So, I look for no harems, which is utterly difficult.

4yr

StarvationLv10

The question was meant to be like : why are you hoping for harem ( for that guy) To not let any missunderstandings

Doxombre:You don't understand how many harems plot I've read from anime, manga, novels. I'm so sick of it, I need a break. So, I look for no harems, which is utterly difficult.

4yr

DorododoLv11

I hate seeing authors bash their early chapters in their synopsis, because if they are let the readers figure it out themselves. It could turn away readers from your work that you have put some much effort in...

4yr

HollowsLv4

I hate lex ;-; why Change the world if your weak then your weak don’t change it just because u got a lil bit if power. this is why i Hate good Poeple if u was there i just kill him that how useless he is

4yr

Savvy_ScribblerLv10

why did u make the mc an insane unjust freak of a killer after chapter 30. It just ruined it for me. Before that it was going very good....

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Sage_SurgeLv14

Hello friends and Author Adam_A.. let me say that it is great to see an interesting idea for a concept fantasy world in this novel, but I am seriously stuck on chapter "11" with too many mistakes read in the writting. This story can definitely be great, but unless someone fixes those horrible mistakes in grammar, syntax, and context this story will be hard to push through... I will try, but I am telling you with this type of story I should not have to do so, these are my thoughts. Good-Day Everyone!

3yr

Aloba_Kehinde_8450Lv4

I’m tired of voting for this book everyday and no new chapter is uploaded pls rectify that

3yr

DaoistnzE5FaLv12

Is this harem? Seems like it will develop into that, since so far 2 girls has fallen for MC hard, at chapter 21. It is not tagged as so, and hope it is not the case

3yr

MAZINO_NALv2

In the summary there?: Chasing the girl everyone loves? Is mc a dog of skirts or what😹😹😹💔

3yr

its_LLv4

author san is this harem or no Harem?

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