Item: Eye System
Rating: 5
Author: Adam_A

Adam_AAuthor4yr

2020-08-08 23:17

This is the author, hope you enjoyed my new novel. Check out my other novel, vote woth power stones and leave a review if you enjoyed. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Eye System

Adam_A

4.7

269 Chs

Liked by 41 people

Replies36

Nikhil_ChandLv4

since this is a system novel will this be harem?

4yr

Adam_AAuthor

I have been contemplating whether or not to and would like input from anyone that has an opinion about it

Nikhil_Chand:since this is a system novel will this be harem?

4yr

Nikhil_ChandLv4

if you can write a harem where it doesnt spoil the story, each harem member has their own personality, each member is useful to MC and is not overly dependent on him, each member gets enough screen time, they spend time together for the most part, shouldnt be forgotten in background or become irrelevant once their arc is over If you can justify above points go for a harem of 3-4 max 5 else dont. its gonna disappoint everyone

Adam_A:I have been contemplating whether or not to and would like input from anyone that has an opinion about it

4yr

Adam_AAuthor

I think I will follow with the romance root and only love Ella, to keep up with his upstanding personality, and thanks for your input. Be sure to give me constructive comments in the future that I will appreciate.

Nikhil_Chand:if you can write a harem where it doesnt spoil the story, each harem member has their own personality, each member is useful to MC and is not overly dependent on him, each member gets enough screen time, they spend time together for the most part, shouldnt be forgotten in background or become irrelevant once their arc is over If you can justify above points go for a harem of 3-4 max 5 else dont. its gonna disappoint everyone

4yr

ProfessorofCultureLv14

harem!

Adam_A:I have been contemplating whether or not to and would like input from anyone that has an opinion about it

4yr

ProfessorofCultureLv14

no uh. having a harem doesn't make him less upstanding

Adam_A:I think I will follow with the romance root and only love Ella, to keep up with his upstanding personality, and thanks for your input. Be sure to give me constructive comments in the future that I will appreciate.

4yr

DeVoidedLv15

Yes I'm loving this train of thought.

Adam_A:I think I will follow with the romance root and only love Ella, to keep up with his upstanding personality, and thanks for your input. Be sure to give me constructive comments in the future that I will appreciate.

4yr

ProfessorofCultureLv14

do you know why I think going for one woman when writing a long novel is bad bcuz the novels usually at one point gets boring with usual similarity in plot. to me adding another woman usually increases the plot dynamics with her character development

Adam_A:I think I will follow with the romance root and only love Ella, to keep up with his upstanding personality, and thanks for your input. Be sure to give me constructive comments in the future that I will appreciate.

4yr

Adam_AAuthor

Well I will try to keep it interesting and both sides have interesting origins and abilities so won't bore the reader

ProfessorofCulture:do you know why I think going for one woman when writing a long novel is bad bcuz the novels usually at one point gets boring with usual similarity in plot. to me adding another woman usually increases the plot dynamics with her character development

4yr

Adam_AAuthor

I will and I am happy that you like my idea, hope you enjoy my novel

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4yr

ProfessorofCultureLv14

let's face it almost all Chinese novels have the same sequence to the extent that all you are looking forward to is the powerups and when he gets his next harem member

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4yr

Emma_WardleLv10

looking forward to checking this out

4yr

DoverowLv14

I wanted to know if you aren't gonna take the web novel contract, if you aren't thank you we can support you in other ways

4yr

HNIC409Lv15

is it possible for u to mass release or update faster? I have plenty of coins nd spirit stones

4yr

Adam_AAuthor

I am trying my best on working on chapters. I am happy you enjoyed

HNIC409:is it possible for u to mass release or update faster? I have plenty of coins nd spirit stones

4yr

HNIC409Lv15

thanks for all da hard work. nd dont burn out from it!

Adam_A:I am trying my best on working on chapters. I am happy you enjoyed

4yr

Adam_AAuthor

Thanks😄

HNIC409:thanks for all da hard work. nd dont burn out from it!

4yr

heatherlillyLv10

I really enjoyed this booj

4yr

Adam_AAuthor

Thanks, leave a review if you enjoyed and check out my other novels

heatherlilly:I really enjoyed this booj

4yr

heatherlillyLv10

anything u can recommend

Adam_A:Thanks, leave a review if you enjoyed and check out my other novels

4yr

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Before reading i just have to add.. Yato's eyes ftw ..And damn required characters for reviews..............................................

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Lord_Meph1stoLv13

This novel had great potential. But I can't read it any longer, too much forced interactions. Ella's interaction is too forced for me to continue this novel. Well it's ur story so all I could do is vent here. Best of luck

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