Sometimes I feel like I'm going crazy. I look at all the reviews for this story and they're all five stars and glowing. Going on about the perfect grammar and brilliant premise. To make things short, if your the type who honestly find 90% of the stories on this site enjoyable, then you'll probably like it as well. If you're the type that think 99% of the stories are utter garbage and you look for those few hidden gems, then you'll likely be disappointed.
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Thanks for the review! Anything in particular I should strive to improve? I'm well aware of the fact that I am not descriptive enough most of the time for example.
Hmm. Is English not your native language? I checked your profile and saw you're from Sweden. If that's the case, then the only thing I would say would be to keep practicing and writing. You have a decent to good grasp of the language, but it's awkward enough at times that you can tell that something is off (not a native speaker). The only big issue, in my mind, was the premise. It just doesn't make a lot of sense once your unpack it. At least in the way you did. Granted, I can be a stickler for those kinds of things.
Yeah I'm from Sweden and at times sentences sound weird to me (and I just don't see what's wrong with them) but it's been getting better and better the more I write, and read I suppose. The premise does make sense to me though so I don't understand you there. It's basically just a way to get an MC without history in the society and yet has the political potential to do great things.
if people think your English is weird, just use some grammar software to make it sound more right.
It's not the kind of mistakes that get snapped up by those programs. Those programs honestly just edit out the rough mistakes that I would have noticed on my own (I've tried using a couple of them).
could get an editor, or ask for the readers to point out the mistakes in the paragraph comments and fix them.
I don't trust anyone enough to get them to edit but if something is commented on I tend to fix it (unless I forget of course). There's also the fact that it's not THAT important, it's just for fun after all. The bottom line though is that I have to just keep writing and reading to get better.
