jonknowsnothing

As someone who loved using em dashes in my writing, years before AI was even a glimmer in the eyes of tech bros, the immediate suspicion is a touch pill to swallow.

Well... At least I only had to read half a chapter before stopping. That's something.

Not to mention Maegor killing his nephew, Baelor the blessed's imprisonment of his sisters, all the blackfyre rebellions...

Kind of beyond retarded? All it takes is one mistake and he's dead.

So the zodiac hunter just... let the naked trafficked prisoners go? Or did an immensely shitty job of protecting them?

What? He literally guessed the opposite last chapter. Quote: "While the possibility of multiple conjured objects couldn't be ruled out, based on current information, it was unlikely the opponent's knives were conjured objects."

Eh, seems more like sloppy writing.

Hopefully he comes up with a better hatsu. His first one is fine, but kind of relies on the second phase being unknown. In a drawn out fight, or if he fights the same opponent again, the hatsu becomes a lot less effective.

lolwat?

Note from the future: I'm 99.9% sure Auren *literally* hasn't thought about or mentioned any of these kids in the next 100+ chapters that are currently out.