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Harvald
HarvaldLv54yr
2020-08-11 02:35

4/3/4/5/5 Can't say anything yet about the stability so 3 neutral stars. Quality is pretty good but not perfect. The Story so far looks promising and uses an interesting new development and I've read thousands of HP-fanfictions. The main character is a pretty smart hard-working OC with some minor ambitions mainly in furthering his family. His character appears genuine not like most character with extreme dispositions in some directions (self-sacrificial, quantum computer for a brain, knowledge just appears from thin air, extreme mood fluctuance etc.). I'm looking forward to how this story continues and just hope that it won't be abandoned.

Harry Potter: The New-Blood Project

Herach
4.7
29 Chs

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Herach
HerachAuthor

It's certainly not perfect. I intend to improve by writing :) Really glad you like the premise and the MC. It's not an Self-insert or some "I'm too smart for this world" kind of MC. I try to make him seem like an actual part of that world and not some outlandish addition. Hope you like how it develops! :)

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Herach
HerachAuthor

It's certainly not perfect. I intend to improve by writing :) Really glad you like the premise and the MC. It's not an Self-insert or some "I'm too smart for this world" kind of MC. I try to make him seem like an actual part of that world and not some outlandish addition. Hope you like how it develops! :)

4yr
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Herach
HerachAuthor

You know what? I deserve a good review! It's not perfect, but I'm improving. If I manage to get through my entire story then one day I'll rewrite it better. Hope you like it in it's current form though!

4yr

SORRYFORTRAFFICJAM
SORRYFORTRAFFICJAMLv3

Very original story in the harry potter universe. Which is impressive, considering how many fanfictions have been made about it. The grammar is good, (very rare for this website), and updates seem to come out very quickly. The OCs added to the story feel very real, for the ones that are mainly in it at the very least. One of the stories that everyone who likes Harry Potter should check out.

4yr
VatOfRedundancy
VatOfRedundancyLv5

wow this is some high quality work author is incredible very few grammar issues and a clear direction for the story. the OC MC is well thought out and has unique abilities without being OP

4yr
laboonlaboon
laboonlaboonLv6

Really good! thank you author! hoping for Susan best waifu! please don't drop !...............................…... ........ ...........

4yr
jonknowsnothing
jonknowsnothingLv1

Sometimes I feel like I'm going crazy. I look at all the reviews for this story and they're all five stars and glowing. Going on about the perfect grammar and brilliant premise. To make things short, if your the type who honestly find 90% of the stories on this site enjoyable, then you'll probably like it as well. If you're the type that think 99% of the stories are utter garbage and you look for those few hidden gems, then you'll likely be disappointed.

4yr
Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6

I need more. This is so good. I need more. This is so good.I need more. This is so good.I need more. This is so good.I need more. This is so good.

4yr
DarckBack
DarckBackLv5

Muy entretenida.Ojalá hubiera mas capitulos😢😢😢😭 es bastante original y entretenida de las mejores que e leido de harry potter ya que tiene un mc con personalidad y no solamente uno posesionado con el poder o super op como las demas

4yr
soul35
soul35Lv4

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4yr
RollingPanda
RollingPandaLv4

Love the story. Love how your unique take. Harry Potter fanfics can become really boring and one note on web novel you’ve made a unique story distanced from the golden trio that can explore the nuances of HP world. Keep it up.

4yr
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