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gejuraa
gejuraaLv24yr
2021-03-21 02:22

Amazing, really amazing. This is my second time rating this novel and I am I'll once again rate it with 5 stars because this novel really deserves it. The mc's character development is also interesting in this novel. In the starting chapters, he acted like a dumb young man. I will not say he acted because he really was dumb but as the story develops, MC's character also changed. In the later chapters, he became smart as all other novels. Well, really interesting story begins after chapter 120. I really f*cking loved the story after that follows after chapter 120. Not only MC becomes powerful by devouring, Heavens also targeted him as he could become an existence that could threaten the heavens in the future. Eyes of heavenly dao also wanted to exterminate Ye Xiao but the Heaven Devouring Divine Dragon devours its attack and even tried to devour the eyes of Heavenly Dao. That was really awesome. There are also many more scenes that follows it. In the end, I will only say this, please be patience while reading this novel because maybe some time in the starting chapters you will get annoyed by MC's foolishness but in the later chapters, the story becomes much more interesting. you will not regret reading this novel, I guarantee it..

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Tentacle_Ethics
Tentacle_EthicsLv14

your rights it's pretty good

Pelerlu
PelerluLv1

lol do you get paid to review

SageOfTitties
SageOfTittiesLv2

lol do you get paid to complain

Pelerlu:lol do you get paid to review
Zackaroo
ZackarooLv14

120 chapters is a really long time to be patient for a stupid MC. 10, 20, 30? Understandable. but 1/4’th of the whole book? Come on, lol.

SomethingElse1
SomethingElse1Lv1

Are we reading the same novel?

Ghost923
Ghost923Lv2

lol do you get paid to roast

SageOfTitties:lol do you get paid to complain
Draconic_Archdevil
Draconic_ArchdevilLv4

What im annoyed about isn't the Mc being dumb but grammar

Draconic_Archdevil
Draconic_ArchdevilLv4

Would be nice if the author used grammarly or some other program that helps

Draconic_Archdevil:What im annoyed about isn't the Mc being dumb but grammar
TirelessSoul000
TirelessSoul000Lv5

Its a bit like against the gods novel.

gejuraa
gejuraaLv2

No, it's not even a bit similar

TirelessSoul000:Its a bit like against the gods novel.
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Kavyansh_Agrawal_0680
Kavyansh_Agrawal_0680Lv2

This review(or specifically "vent of frustration)is full of spoilers.. I USED IDIOT FOR THE MC MOSTLY Oh boy... Well.. first of all... the Mc The mc is straight up trash...his IQ is in negative...cant deduce simple things..has a heavenly treasure but doesn't explore one bit about...he is at the pinnacle of idiocy....always rash.. doesn't listen to others...stands at places like a dumb idiot...wants revenge but is stupidity playing around gathering "FRIENDS"...dude knows that the lin yun whatever guy...came with the elders of his sect to kill the 5th elder..as stated by lin yun himself.. But what does the mc do?? He fricking runs away crying like an idiot..dude your enemy is in front of you..and YOU RAN AWAY CRYING THAT LIKE A CHILD..then 2 chapters later..he doing bromance....HE HAS NO MOTIVATION...IS JUST A STUPID GUY.. THAT'S ALL THERE IS TO THE MC.... UUUUGHHHHHH.........he doesn't even explore the heavenly pearl completely..... An example of the idiot..- He takes little yellow to the heavenly pearl.. sometimes later finds little yellow sleeping...now...he tries to touch him but gets stung instead... little yellow wakes and heals him..and makes the flower normal..ONLY AFTER THAT DID THE IDIOT ACTUALLY REALISE THAT THE FLOWERS WERE ATTACKING HIM DUE TO LITTLE YELLOW ... I don't know wht he thought was the cause of attck before.....UGGH He then tells little yellow to same thing in the real world as traps...little yellow tries to tell the idiot that he cannot do that in the real world..by hand signs... THE IDIOT YELLS AT HIM TO EXPLAIN PROPERLY...EVEN KNOWING THAT LITTLE YELLOW CAN'T TALK... (that's what the idiot knew at the time) and when little yellow does communicate...he gets shocked..i mean dude...why did you even tell him to explain.... Tch.. There are many more things.... I'll waste no more time..anymore Other then the MC...hmmm... IT'S ALL CLITCH..

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