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Ave_Grimm
Ave_GrimmLv104yr
2020-08-05 13:49

I read this novel. It is very nice, please update fast. I really like this type of novels. It is quite good, it's storyline is the thing that I liked the most.

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RazaKarim
RazaKarimAuthor

Thank you, please keep supporting me and I will work hard

Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4

Author is this harem?

RazaKarim:Thank you, please keep supporting me and I will work hard
Brexter
BrexterLv3

Kinda seems like against the heavens, doesn't it?

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Brexter
BrexterLv3

Against the heavens was, this story kinda just took the premise. Guy hunted to cliff swallows divine pearl wakes up with it in the next life

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Brexter
BrexterLv3

it probably is

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Stuffedcrow
StuffedcrowLv14

is it harem

Ave_Grimm
Ave_GrimmLv10

Till now, no.

Stuffedcrow:is it harem
PathOfGod
PathOfGodLv11

Please change the MC. He is unorginal and is like a copy and paste of other Chinese MC. He is idiotic and Cliche. He somehow falls in a woman he just met and not try to build his relationship with her. He tell her almost everything about him. He only leaves the Heavenly Pearl out. I hope you change him to be more orginal. How bout making not cliche and let him use his brain. He has wings but spends a whole day making a boat. I know he can only use it for sometime but it atleast would get him to his destination faster than a boat that he spent a whole day making. He can cultivate faster in his Havenly Pearl place but chooses to cultivate outside. He is even dumber than some other chinese novel mc. Atleast they know how to use their cheats better.

RazaKarim:Thank you, please keep supporting me and I will work hard
RazaKarim
RazaKarimAuthor

Yeah I know! That's why I already told in the synopsis of the novel that MC is dumb. But I guarantee that you will not find any romance between MC and any other girls before chapter number 200...

PathOfGod:Please change the MC. He is unorginal and is like a copy and paste of other Chinese MC. He is idiotic and Cliche. He somehow falls in a woman he just met and not try to build his relationship with her. He tell her almost everything about him. He only leaves the Heavenly Pearl out. I hope you change him to be more orginal. How bout making not cliche and let him use his brain. He has wings but spends a whole day making a boat. I know he can only use it for sometime but it atleast would get him to his destination faster than a boat that he spent a whole day making. He can cultivate faster in his Havenly Pearl place but chooses to cultivate outside. He is even dumber than some other chinese novel mc. Atleast they know how to use their cheats better.
J_S_2998
J_S_2998Lv13

Why would you decide to write a novel where the MC is so dumb? Most people wouldn’t want to spend time or money on a novel where the MC makes them get irritated because he keeps doing stupid things or making dumb choices. So I’m curious what made you decide to make the MC like that.

RazaKarim:Yeah I know! That's why I already told in the synopsis of the novel that MC is dumb. But I guarantee that you will not find any romance between MC and any other girls before chapter number 200...
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Kavyansh_Agrawal_0680
Kavyansh_Agrawal_0680Lv2

This review(or specifically "vent of frustration)is full of spoilers.. I USED IDIOT FOR THE MC MOSTLY Oh boy... Well.. first of all... the Mc The mc is straight up trash...his IQ is in negative...cant deduce simple things..has a heavenly treasure but doesn't explore one bit about...he is at the pinnacle of idiocy....always rash.. doesn't listen to others...stands at places like a dumb idiot...wants revenge but is stupidity playing around gathering "FRIENDS"...dude knows that the lin yun whatever guy...came with the elders of his sect to kill the 5th elder..as stated by lin yun himself.. But what does the mc do?? He fricking runs away crying like an idiot..dude your enemy is in front of you..and YOU RAN AWAY CRYING THAT LIKE A CHILD..then 2 chapters later..he doing bromance....HE HAS NO MOTIVATION...IS JUST A STUPID GUY.. THAT'S ALL THERE IS TO THE MC.... UUUUGHHHHHH.........he doesn't even explore the heavenly pearl completely..... An example of the idiot..- He takes little yellow to the heavenly pearl.. sometimes later finds little yellow sleeping...now...he tries to touch him but gets stung instead... little yellow wakes and heals him..and makes the flower normal..ONLY AFTER THAT DID THE IDIOT ACTUALLY REALISE THAT THE FLOWERS WERE ATTACKING HIM DUE TO LITTLE YELLOW ... I don't know wht he thought was the cause of attck before.....UGGH He then tells little yellow to same thing in the real world as traps...little yellow tries to tell the idiot that he cannot do that in the real world..by hand signs... THE IDIOT YELLS AT HIM TO EXPLAIN PROPERLY...EVEN KNOWING THAT LITTLE YELLOW CAN'T TALK... (that's what the idiot knew at the time) and when little yellow does communicate...he gets shocked..i mean dude...why did you even tell him to explain.... Tch.. There are many more things.... I'll waste no more time..anymore Other then the MC...hmmm... IT'S ALL CLITCH..

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