SomethingElse1

Its translated by endlessfantasy translations, I don't think I need to add more to this review with their reputation. Never read anything by this translation group, it's all MTL with zero editing. In 13 chapters, we know nothing about the MC or his background other than his name. Side characters are just there to exist to kill or use. Story development: There's a story? If I could give a 0 rating I would. World Background: Cultivation is a game I think but also real life. I don't know, this novel makes no sense.

Sure seems upset for someone without emotions.

It's a fun read for a short while but after awhile, the corny jokes just get stale. The poor grammar doesn't help as well since a lot of times, it ruins the flow of the story. It's obvious with dialogue, the author attempted to create something similar to Xianxia novels but the dialogue really falls short. It's uncreative, poorly construed, and awkward. Story development and World Background is very generic to Xianxia novels so there's nothing wrong with it but there's also nothing unique either. Now, poor grammar can be fixed with sites like Grammarly. Dialogue is a bit harder but character design? All the characters are so similar, they all seem to have the same traits except for one point which the author shoves down your throats. There's nothing interesting about any characters and most of the time, the author forces a random character to do or say something stupid or out of line to for no reason. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed up till about ch. 80~ but then it just felt like a chore to read from stale jokes, to awkward dialogue, to forced drama. It started strong and died.

Why is he caring about this now? He literally flew to the city with many people spotting him.

What a useless dialogue. Authors attempt at trying to be funny. Fart jokes...

Better feed them shit and see if it's true.

It would be awesome to be Lin 420, sucks to be Lin 666

16g of beef = 10% loyalty increase of 60 people dam....Give them a whole chicken leg and they might be kissing ur feet at that point.

1000 gram / 60 people = 16.7g, what? Get their loyalty for 16g of beef! Sign me up. If loyalty was so easy lol....

Very average, the things bringing it down the most is the awkward dialogue and the poor grammar. It seems like when the authors putting their thoughts into words they sometimes miss words and it's a pretty frequent thing per chapter. It's obvious no proofreading is done, maybe later on but early chapters have way too many noticeable mistakes. A lot of sentences are too longer as they are just constantly extended with multiple commas. Character design, average. Not much to think about as they're using characters from anime but it seems like a lot of the characters are a bit 2D. Main character is a pretty boring individual with supposedly high morals, not really though as he randomly has s*x with a girl he met while reading a p*rn magazine. World building is strange, it uses the dorm from Sakurasou and I guess what the author thinks Tokyo is like based on anime. I can't speak from experience as I've never been to Tokyo so I can't judge that.