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lumijekcrLv13yr
2021-09-15 15:44

I mean I was enjoying the novel and found it a pretty good read but lately the MC actions are getting annoying. Mans literally(even though he is supposed to rule the heavens) becomes a subordinate of someone(beautiful girl...shocker shocker) then when he is out drags out fights and never displays full power because you know... the dao of low key. Like whats the point of having power if you can't use it. And everytime he is about to use his power some random other family comes and stops the attack. like bro why. Anyways I finished my rant about my hate for recent chapters.

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RazaKarim
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Don't worry, MC will not be low-key at all and will show his prowess to the world. As for being a subordinate..... Ye Xiao is a friend of Yue Ying not her subordinate, and he choose to follow her because first she saved him and the second, he wanted to know more about the Immortal Star World and how to go to other worlds and he could only get these information in the Dragon Immortal Sect. So, he followed her there! In the future, you'll not find MC under anyone. He'll just do what he want and will never walk on other's path.

Rohit_Saini_4120
Rohit_Saini_4120Lv12

bro i am satisfied with your comment when you said what is the use of having power if you can't use it as you wish

1MilfBreaker_123
1MilfBreaker_123Lv12

ye I noticed it to but author didn't change anything mc still didn't use his current power or kill any young master that bother him or intended to kill him specially at the reincarnation arc thing the book is great but it's just annoying me that mc is saying that he will be low key but still attract others interest to him

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This review(or specifically "vent of frustration)is full of spoilers.. I USED IDIOT FOR THE MC MOSTLY Oh boy... Well.. first of all... the Mc The mc is straight up trash...his IQ is in negative...cant deduce simple things..has a heavenly treasure but doesn't explore one bit about...he is at the pinnacle of idiocy....always rash.. doesn't listen to others...stands at places like a dumb idiot...wants revenge but is stupidity playing around gathering "FRIENDS"...dude knows that the lin yun whatever guy...came with the elders of his sect to kill the 5th elder..as stated by lin yun himself.. But what does the mc do?? He fricking runs away crying like an idiot..dude your enemy is in front of you..and YOU RAN AWAY CRYING THAT LIKE A CHILD..then 2 chapters later..he doing bromance....HE HAS NO MOTIVATION...IS JUST A STUPID GUY.. THAT'S ALL THERE IS TO THE MC.... UUUUGHHHHHH.........he doesn't even explore the heavenly pearl completely..... An example of the idiot..- He takes little yellow to the heavenly pearl.. sometimes later finds little yellow sleeping...now...he tries to touch him but gets stung instead... little yellow wakes and heals him..and makes the flower normal..ONLY AFTER THAT DID THE IDIOT ACTUALLY REALISE THAT THE FLOWERS WERE ATTACKING HIM DUE TO LITTLE YELLOW ... I don't know wht he thought was the cause of attck before.....UGGH He then tells little yellow to same thing in the real world as traps...little yellow tries to tell the idiot that he cannot do that in the real world..by hand signs... THE IDIOT YELLS AT HIM TO EXPLAIN PROPERLY...EVEN KNOWING THAT LITTLE YELLOW CAN'T TALK... (that's what the idiot knew at the time) and when little yellow does communicate...he gets shocked..i mean dude...why did you even tell him to explain.... Tch.. There are many more things.... I'll waste no more time..anymore Other then the MC...hmmm... IT'S ALL CLITCH..

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