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Mistaken_me
Mistaken_meLv133yr
2021-09-12 00:03

way too fast. way too fast. no depth in story, poor character development and like as most of the cliche xinxia novels(but a rip-off version). author says it will get better after 100 ch, but literally no improvement. very much lacking in writing skills. if your requirements are of as in BTTH or ATG,etc. this is not your cup of tea [img=recommend]

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Rohit_Saini_4120
Rohit_Saini_4120Lv12

may be no deep story but it have less arrogant young master less chit chat during fighting same as all other novels

1MilfBreaker_123
1MilfBreaker_123Lv12

actually there is specially at latter chapters like young master is bothering him to extend to kill him but mc will just cut off his arm then he will let the young master be and then next the patriarch or the father of young master will come and mc is op at that time though and mc should just straight up kill him thats why I like ruthless mc more

Rohit_Saini_4120:may be no deep story but it have less arrogant young master less chit chat during fighting same as all other novels
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Kavyansh_Agrawal_0680
Kavyansh_Agrawal_0680Lv2

This review(or specifically "vent of frustration)is full of spoilers.. I USED IDIOT FOR THE MC MOSTLY Oh boy... Well.. first of all... the Mc The mc is straight up trash...his IQ is in negative...cant deduce simple things..has a heavenly treasure but doesn't explore one bit about...he is at the pinnacle of idiocy....always rash.. doesn't listen to others...stands at places like a dumb idiot...wants revenge but is stupidity playing around gathering "FRIENDS"...dude knows that the lin yun whatever guy...came with the elders of his sect to kill the 5th elder..as stated by lin yun himself.. But what does the mc do?? He fricking runs away crying like an idiot..dude your enemy is in front of you..and YOU RAN AWAY CRYING THAT LIKE A CHILD..then 2 chapters later..he doing bromance....HE HAS NO MOTIVATION...IS JUST A STUPID GUY.. THAT'S ALL THERE IS TO THE MC.... UUUUGHHHHHH.........he doesn't even explore the heavenly pearl completely..... An example of the idiot..- He takes little yellow to the heavenly pearl.. sometimes later finds little yellow sleeping...now...he tries to touch him but gets stung instead... little yellow wakes and heals him..and makes the flower normal..ONLY AFTER THAT DID THE IDIOT ACTUALLY REALISE THAT THE FLOWERS WERE ATTACKING HIM DUE TO LITTLE YELLOW ... I don't know wht he thought was the cause of attck before.....UGGH He then tells little yellow to same thing in the real world as traps...little yellow tries to tell the idiot that he cannot do that in the real world..by hand signs... THE IDIOT YELLS AT HIM TO EXPLAIN PROPERLY...EVEN KNOWING THAT LITTLE YELLOW CAN'T TALK... (that's what the idiot knew at the time) and when little yellow does communicate...he gets shocked..i mean dude...why did you even tell him to explain.... Tch.. There are many more things.... I'll waste no more time..anymore Other then the MC...hmmm... IT'S ALL CLITCH..

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