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josuemandrak
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2021-01-12 10:00

I don't see anything special, let's see what you want to offer us MC Evil and what else? What else do you have to offer? That's the question. And I need more characters ..................... [It sounds too abstract I don't know]

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XIANJING
XIANJINGLv3

because you are a dog

SabertoothX15
SabertoothX15Lv13

What species??

XIANJING:because you are a dog
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

You know, when i see harem fanfic with Same damn mc every time, I ask the same question. Is it all? Like his character don't exist, mc doesn't do anything and no change for Canon is made. Is it all what you got? But here I see at least something, at least villain mc. And yes, that is a character. Because I don't even know how to describe harem fanfic mc of all other works... Like Japanese beta male? Something like this.

InJustThis
InJustThisAuthor

The question is not what I can offer, but what you want. I don't really know what you want, but I won't play this game with you. And perceiving from your choice of words, I can see it really doesn't matter what I say. Let's just end this with your review. No need to reply. I don't have time so I won't respond.

Shinkaio
ShinkaioLv5

He means why is the mc evil? Killing to achieve a goal is being ruthless, killing for killing is psychopathy

RichBoyWinston
RichBoyWinstonLv3

Harem novels and villain MCs already became the new cliche, people just aren't tired of it yet. You can legit make a whole novel whose sole purpose is the MC making a harem and having fun times with girls, and still have it on the top 5. Same for evil mcs, just saying the MC is evil is normally enough to attract people. I'm really tired of 90% of the novels on here having the MC being extra evil for no reason, and complaining when the MC isn't ruthless no matter the kind of story.

Plot_armour
Plot_armourLv2

Tbh there are two extreme sides. But evil mcs make way more sense than those delusional self righteous hypocritical mcs.and harem is like a huge part of novels. It would never die the same to evil mcs as long mcs like naruto exist

RichBoyWinston:Harem novels and villain MCs already became the new cliche, people just aren't tired of it yet. You can legit make a whole novel whose sole purpose is the MC making a harem and having fun times with girls, and still have it on the top 5. Same for evil mcs, just saying the MC is evil is normally enough to attract people. I'm really tired of 90% of the novels on here having the MC being extra evil for no reason, and complaining when the MC isn't ruthless no matter the kind of story.
RichBoyWinston
RichBoyWinstonLv3

I wouldn't say evil mcs here make way more sense because most of the time they aren't being evil for their own benefit or other reason, they literally just do it to look cool for their readers or for no real reason. It would be interesting if it happened once as it would make a unique MC, but when it becomes the norm it makes people quickly get tired of it. Just like how Japanese protagonists are most of the time goody two shoes, original novel protagonists are 90% of the time mindless psycopaths This is just swapping one cliche for another, I don't really like it that much.

Plot_armour:Tbh there are two extreme sides. But evil mcs make way more sense than those delusional self righteous hypocritical mcs.and harem is like a huge part of novels. It would never die the same to evil mcs as long mcs like naruto exist
Retro_
Retro_Lv3

Evil Mc and harem story will only be good if writen correctly

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

You beta

RichBoyWinston:Harem novels and villain MCs already became the new cliche, people just aren't tired of it yet. You can legit make a whole novel whose sole purpose is the MC making a harem and having fun times with girls, and still have it on the top 5. Same for evil mcs, just saying the MC is evil is normally enough to attract people. I'm really tired of 90% of the novels on here having the MC being extra evil for no reason, and complaining when the MC isn't ruthless no matter the kind of story.
RichBoyWinston
RichBoyWinstonLv3

Bob_Uchiha_XD:You beta
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Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

RichBoyWinston:
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Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Your face gif

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