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  • Retro_
    Retro_6 months ago
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    Honest Review! Writing Quality:5/5-I see no grammar mistakes and it is much better than those trash translation and bad grammar Fics. Stability of Update:5/5-Since it's just four chapters in. Story development:5/5-Loving it. Mc is the grandson of Tobirama. Character desig:5/5-Good World Background:I am loving it!

  • Retro_
    Retro_a year ago
    Posted

    Since this book is just beginning, I'm reviewing it So the plot is well Mc transmigrates as Matsuda! The story is readable I did see some grammar mistakes but no typos. Keep going mate!

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  • Retro_
    Retro_a year ago
    Replied to as123

    One Piece is all about crews and friendship not Harem or Romance. Sure there are kingdoms and such but do you really think the female would love to be in a Harem and look at the title MARINE, you think WG will allow Mc to get a harem of PIRATES?

  • Retro_
    Retro_a year ago
    Replied to Injustice

    I mean nah

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  • Retro_
    Retro_a year ago
    Replied to Tog_Python

    It will be but will take a little while

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  • Retro_
    Retro_a year ago
    Replied to Tractopelle

    i mean they HELPED fairy tail..you don't pay good with evil unless you a villian

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  • Retro_
    Retro_a year ago
    Replied to Lyrical_Ivo

    nah bro if I drop it's either if I die or things like that

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  • Retro_
    Retro_a year ago
    Replied to Tractopelle

    I mean killing Vali is IDIOTIC

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  • Retro_
    Retro_a year ago
    Posted

    The story itself is good...the plot is GOOD but the thing is it sucks ffgtyhyu uuy iu i yu i yui uyiuhiuhiuiiuriuruv hthhuijt