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Jajaiabakabaianaa
JajaiabakabaianaaLv43yr
2021-01-12 00:14

The grammar is very good and fluent. The updates are, I think, only 3 chapters a week and this is a bit of a shame but I can understand the situation of the author so the only thing I ask you is not to drop the story because in my opinion it is done well, even if it is a little early to say since we're just starting out. I do not have much to say for the background of the story because it takes those of the anime, I just need a brief description but that explains it to me well. finally I love how mc behaves, a good evil. nice good luck

My Touch Corpse System

InJustThis
4.7
39 Chs

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InJustThis
InJustThisAuthor

Thanks, I appreciate your review. :D

3yr
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Fireball_4527
Fireball_4527Lv14

its also(in my opinion) high quality content. so if it really is 3 chapters a week its better then most of the stuff I got in my library that update every week to a month.

3yr
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Hit30
Hit30Lv13

Story looks good specially the way MC act's hope you will not drop it .......................................................................

4yr

InJustThis
InJustThisAuthor

A good author always rate his novel 5 stars! Author, InJustThis, is here! Come and drop by. If you liked the novel, don't forget to comment in the comment section. I appreciate your praises. ^^

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josuemandrak
josuemandrakLv2

I don't see anything special, let's see what you want to offer us MC Evil and what else? What else do you have to offer? That's the question. And I need more characters ..................... [It sounds too abstract I don't know]

3yr
TheOnlyKing
TheOnlyKingLv4

This is without a doubt among the top 10 fics that I've read in recent months. The MC is a breath of fresh air. He's not dumb, he doesn't have a savior-complex, he's not some beta and above all else: HE'S NOT A SIMP. Are you tired of the mc bowing down to women and letting them walk all over him? or perhaps making dumb decisions because of forced plot? or maybe even getting nerfed by his own system?! If you are then have no worries because you won't find any of that in this fic! The mc is also dark with a great sense of humor, you WILL find yourself at the very least cracking a smile. As a bonus if you hate Takashi then you will certainly enjoy this 😉.

3yr
Baylord_Yama
Baylord_YamaLv2

We need more fanfics like this with evil mc punishing beta male jp protags. I gave 5 star before reading for idea. I will review after reading and gave one more 5 star if its readable. Anti heros always a welcome if written correctly.

3yr
Mastrethe
MastretheLv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Carla_Santos
Carla_SantosLv2

very good story love mc and i hope you cintinue onwards because evil mc storys are mi favorites.[img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Precheur
PrecheurLv5

I don't like it. I don't mind villain, arrogant, even pervert OC, but there is one thing which i can't tolerate : Where do you find to act mighty when the only reason you're out of your shit hole is because of a system ? And this is the big issue, characters are shallow, they're like ghost made for the OC, and it's driving me crazy. Not for me.

3yr
Lord_Eternity
Lord_EternityLv4

First of all authors grammer is ok(good based on webnovel's average) So they story is ok yes just ok. The was good as it started. Evil mc, no moral education, strength gain etc. But now at 30 chaps to story there are many flaws. Biggest one is that author wants to write lyrics in story. Ya as a joke its good sometimes but if every second chapter is filled with lyrics then thats plain boring. Another issue is mc's inner monologue fills one-third of story where he just keep sporuting wierd sh*t. In start it was funny but author just overdid it. Now that feels like filler rather than joke. All good? NO! His relationship progression with girls is even worse than original. Mc's stat growth is useless. He will stay the same guy.

3yr
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