This is the author here to tell you about my novel. Now if you want an honest review then I'll tell you that my book isn't for everyone. It starts off in resident evil then goes to 'I am number four' otherwise known as Lorien Legacies... I am focusing on movies that are underappreciated and all. Background and everything is good. I feel that my character OC is well rounded out. He may have a lack of emotions but that just makes him more empathetic and not unable to enjoy certain things. His first thought is to kill anyone that could be a threat but slowly this changes due to his lovers. Now the harem will be small... rather I should say I plan to visit so many movies and the harem will be small in comparison. There will be no long separations, rather when they separate it will be for their own growth. There will be no NTR, or anything like that but this is mature genre... maybe some of his girls will betray him or want to kill him later.. My ex gfs sometimes wanna kill me too, at one point they loved me.. haha... It's just life uk? There will be gods, evolution, scifi, romance, slice of life and everything in between. And finally I ask that everyone leaves an honest review. I have rewrote starting from the prologue so I hope those who read it previous begins to re-read it.
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Who girls in nc harem? *sorry i bad english
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Kurigohan:Who girls in nc harem? *sorry i bad english
so far Alice from Resident Evil, and Elizabeth from Lorian Legacies or 'I am Number Four'. The other harem members are still pending.
Kurigohan:Who girls in nc harem? *sorry i bad english
So far Alice from Resident Evil and Elizabeth from 'I am Number Four'. Though, Jill and K-Mart may join later down the line when the plot thickens. So that's four locked in. Two right now,
Kurigohan:Who girls in nc harem? *sorry i bad english
It's been a long time since I seen 'I am Number Four' so I tried looking up the character Elizabeth and found no one. So I looked deeper and the only Elizabeth I found was a visual artist someone who isn't even in the movie. So... who's Elizabeth?
The_Young_Flash:So far Alice from Resident Evil and Elizabeth from 'I am Number Four'. Though, Jill and K-Mart may join later down the line when the plot thickens. So that's four locked in. Two right now,
Maren Elizabeth also known as Number 6 in the movie. Haha. The badass girl that appears near the end.
Akabane:It's been a long time since I seen 'I am Number Four' so I tried looking up the character Elizabeth and found no one. So I looked deeper and the only Elizabeth I found was a visual artist someone who isn't even in the movie. So... who's Elizabeth?
Was going to read but you said "maybe some of his girls will betray him or even kill him later" Nah this isn't my type at all🤷♂️
I will read but the first sign of his girls betraying him and I am outta here :p reading novels for me is an escape from reality so don't really want to read MC getting betrayed by his women.
Okay I don't have trouble with harem I like them. But after reading your statement about the girls betraying wanting to kill him (even though it won't include things like NTR and the likes) it makes me wish you choose a single pairing...the concept seems interisting I will give it a try even though I don't know If I could keep reading if yiu truly have the girls betraying it .. .it is a fantasy webnovel/fanfic realism and having it close to rl shouldn't be a priority even though when you aim for a story about the multiverse and powers and the likes .. All things thst implied that your story couldn't be more different than real life
Betraying him*
crazyspecter:Okay I don't have trouble with harem I like them. But after reading your statement about the girls betraying wanting to kill him (even though it won't include things like NTR and the likes) it makes me wish you choose a single pairing...the concept seems interisting I will give it a try even though I don't know If I could keep reading if yiu truly have the girls betraying it .. .it is a fantasy webnovel/fanfic realism and having it close to rl shouldn't be a priority even though when you aim for a story about the multiverse and powers and the likes .. All things thst implied that your story couldn't be more different than real life
no ntr. as for the betrayal. you'll just have to wait and see kz there will be a good reason for it. the girls won't betray him per se. they just choose to not betray their humanity.
crazyspecter:Okay I don't have trouble with harem I like them. But after reading your statement about the girls betraying wanting to kill him (even though it won't include things like NTR and the likes) it makes me wish you choose a single pairing...the concept seems interisting I will give it a try even though I don't know If I could keep reading if yiu truly have the girls betraying it .. .it is a fantasy webnovel/fanfic realism and having it close to rl shouldn't be a priority even though when you aim for a story about the multiverse and powers and the likes .. All things thst implied that your story couldn't be more different than real life
They will not betray him per se. But I can't say more than that... The betrayal is not in a way of choosing something else over him, it is more in a way to choose to save the mc from himself. But it is fine if you don't want to continue.
ErjasD:Was going to read but you said "maybe some of his girls will betray him or even kill him later" Nah this isn't my type at all🤷♂️
Wow , I actually forgot about this.Took you 2 months eh😯
The_Young_Flash:They will not betray him per se. But I can't say more than that... The betrayal is not in a way of choosing something else over him, it is more in a way to choose to save the mc from himself. But it is fine if you don't want to continue.
Nah, I saw this at the time and forgot to answer. But I am trying to re-vamp the novel since I think my novel is better than most of those that rank higher than me on the list. I changed the name and made clarifications so nobody assumes it is a book about betrayal and stuff. I don't like it when readers read the comments and assume the book is nonsense.
ErjasD:Wow , I actually forgot about this.Took you 2 months eh😯
You said jill and k-mart who are these prospective harem members?
The_Young_Flash:Nah, I saw this at the time and forgot to answer. But I am trying to re-vamp the novel since I think my novel is better than most of those that rank higher than me on the list. I changed the name and made clarifications so nobody assumes it is a book about betrayal and stuff. I don't like it when readers read the comments and assume the book is nonsense.
Though when do alice and the mc become a couple and /or seXually?
They will be harem members at a later Universe... admittedly, Jill won't get much screen time but she will always remain important to the plot.
wolf_Master:You said jill and k-mart who are these prospective harem members?
I am adding titles to the chapters so I will also label R18 chapters. But I would say around chapters in the 30's.
wolf_Master:Though when do alice and the mc become a couple and /or seXually?
Just to clarify because the way the author said it might mislead some and miss out on this good story, the *betrayal* that he's mentioning is actually just an argument/ disagreement/fight that happens because the Mc did something really bad and they're trying to stop him for his own good, so it's actually for character development and they make up again soon after lol. So no, there's no betrayal that you might think about.
At least you understand lml... I sometimes read reviews, and if I see a bad one, I don't read the novel lmao... I guess some people do the same to my novel lol... But yeah... no betrayal ever... but maybe I should say there will be 'tough-love'? Haha, does that sound better?
Zedom:Just to clarify because the way the author said it might mislead some and miss out on this good story, the *betrayal* that he's mentioning is actually just an argument/ disagreement/fight that happens because the Mc did something really bad and they're trying to stop him for his own good, so it's actually for character development and they make up again soon after lol. So no, there's no betrayal that you might think about.
