I'm just going to warn enyone reading this that I've slept for less than 3 hours on average for a whole week. This review will be incoherent and not grammatically correct. Character design: Extremely childish mc, everything falls into his lap and everyone else is either designated followers or idiotic villains. The rest is just an expendable peanut gallery, which will get killed off over and over again. Worse than that, to have the mc monopolize all the exp and boss fights, the universe adds whatever bs reasoning necessary. All of his choices are always correct. Everyone who chooses other paths die. His fighting is "flawess and epitome of being efficient". Why this is the case is not explained at all - it must be attributed to the mc being awesome. He himself is "overwhelmingly smart" (and does "much smart very brain" moves). He also is edgelordy to the extreme. World background: Well, we know that he starts out in a school. The school itself is located in a city, which also contains some woods and a gym. This is literally the only description we've gotten so far. There are no mentions of any details. Heck, all we know of the characters is that the girl wears a red tracksuit - that's it. Translation quality: I cannot actually claim with 100% certainty that the translation is bad. The original text could perhaps be of blame too? However, the quality is nonetheless still poor. We also get these minor errors that make little sense. The mc's sidekick uses throwing daggers as his weapon. After three hours since the "game" (or whatever this is) starts, he gets progressively better at throwing these daggers. Here, we get the description that the sidekick is improving his skill day-by-day. Which makes little sense, considering how it's still the first fricking day. Nevertheless, the text is indeed readable. It's just very flawed. Story development: So far I've just seen clichés (but implemented in the poorest manner possible). It's like the author tried to take Sovereign of Judment and mix it with an arbitrary Korean Necromancer story. In the end we get this awful mixture, built upon bad clichés. It's not hard to predict how the story will proceed. Judgement: Honestly, if you have nothing else to read it is alright. It's not the worst story. It is however, very childish and plotarmored. Don't expect much from it and your expectations won't shatter.
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Thanks for your review. Honestly, a childish story isn't interesting nor fun to read. If I have nothing to read, I'd rather read Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God than this, based on what you said.
And to think I almost read this.
