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Djabilong
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2020-11-04 09:08

Dunno where all these glowing reviews come from, but this novel is honestly kinda bad by its own "merit"; and translation puts the final nail in the coffin (pun intended). - there are times when it is borderline unreadable, with borked grammar and straight up chunks of text missing. - a lot of things are never mentioned, then suddenly pop up in such a way where you are somehow expected to know them prior. - particular things just keep randomly transforming, like the item's rank can be stated as "general", then "common" two paragraphs later, and on the next page it switches to lettering and becomes "D" rank. - a >>NECROMANCER<< outright hates his own summons (undead in general really) and treats them like shit, as they do all the work while he passively stands and does nothing; which is made infinitely worse since the summons somehow possess sweet puppydog childlike personalities instead of simply being mindless puppets. - the supposed recently discharged "special forces military officer" protagonist has below-average stats and is struggling (physically AND mentally) with a single lvl.1 gobbo that is the size of a kindergartener. - I'm honestly aren't against thick plot armor if it is played for laughs or is at least used sparingly, but it's pretty apparent that this is a self-insert with how the universe bends over backwards and showers protagonist with goodies and lucky encounters every two pages while he becries how cruel and unfair the world is. There's no explanation. He's not a regressor, not a time traveller, doesn't possess a lucky aura artefact and isn't sleeping with a goddess. It just is what it is. Every two pages. What even. - the living sidekicks of MC are just... Yeah... Let's just say that you are in for a treat with those. - <a dozen more complaints of the petty kind, that I'm too lazy to type in>

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