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LokiMaster
LokiMasterLv144yr
2020-07-17 22:01

Normally when i find a good novel i will review it meticulously and try to get everybody to give it a try, at least with the 39 free chapters, and this novel is indeed one such that would warrant that. However web novel has been on a streak of choosing **** novels and letting better ones like this one go untranslated hence i will not do a huge review. Read the 39 free chapters and even if you don't completely love the novel you will at least want its continued translation

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Max255
Max255Lv6

Hur Hur Hur

asmodeus
asmodeusLv5

they just dropped war truck apocalypse for a novel that hasn't been here for more than a week.

shashank_bhatt
shashank_bhattLv14

One of the reasons I stopped reading the novels here because of this reason as well. World of deities, History's Strongest Son in law and so on. The novels which were worthy to read were removed before even a month was over.

shashank_bhatt
shashank_bhattLv14

One of the reasons I stopped reading the novels here because of this reason as well. World of deities, History's Strongest Son in law and so on. The novels which were worthy to read were removed before even a month was over.

LokiMaster
LokiMasterLv14

They also dropped It's Lonely To Be Invincible, Im The MC, Why Do I Suck At Cultivation? And Plague Doctor... I seriously don't understand the reason behind this? The novels were shown support had high ratings but they just decided to drop them? In return from some S H 1 T Y novels which have like 2-3.5 ratings and everybody hates them? Lastly the most annoying thing is there's no easy way to get in contact with the people of webnovel to even give any suggestions... smh

shashank_bhatt:One of the reasons I stopped reading the novels here because of this reason as well. World of deities, History's Strongest Son in law and so on. The novels which were worthy to read were removed before even a month was over.
Wison_Ace
Wison_AceLv4

Why don't WuxiaW pick up the good novels that Webnovel dropped? I'm starving for good novels... Seriously, I know that my taste in novels ain't that great but atleast I know how to differenciate good novels from bad novels...jeez fukn budh

Fries
FriesLv15

Noo that was sooo gooood

asmodeus:they just dropped war truck apocalypse for a novel that hasn't been here for more than a week.
TheDolphin
TheDolphinLv13

Custom Made Demon King, Building the Ultimate Fantasy, and Astral Soul Pets were all really well written novels, don't feel like you can call it a "streak" of bad novels

Robertorbr
RobertorbrLv5

It doesn't change the fact that several other good novels were buried, I'm waiting for an undead night to translate them

TheDolphin:Custom Made Demon King, Building the Ultimate Fantasy, and Astral Soul Pets were all really well written novels, don't feel like you can call it a "streak" of bad novels
Shiro_Kuro_2780
Shiro_Kuro_2780Lv11

Is a $100,000 enough to build a tiny I don't know translating studio or something? Maybe I should make one and translate the dropped good novels. Or maybe I should just learn chinese

asmodeus
asmodeusLv5

me too, I only read the novel's that got picked, I can't handle another plague doctor.

shashank_bhatt:One of the reasons I stopped reading the novels here because of this reason as well. World of deities, History's Strongest Son in law and so on. The novels which were worthy to read were removed before even a month was over.
asmodeus
asmodeusLv5

i know, that's why imma just read novel's that got picked.

Fries:Noo that was sooo gooood
Chaos_Prime
Chaos_PrimeLv15

If u do make one and translate these good novels. Pls tell us we would love to check it out. I’m sure I’m not the only one

Shiro_Kuro_2780:Is a $100,000 enough to build a tiny I don't know translating studio or something? Maybe I should make one and translate the dropped good novels. Or maybe I should just learn chinese
Chaos_Prime
Chaos_PrimeLv15

True

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Overlord_Venus
Overlord_VenusLv14

That is lot!!! You can create a big translating team and lead them using that much fund. After that, you can pick up the books you want from the dropped books in WN (If a translating team wants to pick up a dropped book, WN would be glad to give them the green signal.) Then, you can start earning from the income the translated books generate and recover your investment.

Shiro_Kuro_2780:Is a $100,000 enough to build a tiny I don't know translating studio or something? Maybe I should make one and translate the dropped good novels. Or maybe I should just learn chinese
Loli_Platoon79
Loli_Platoon79Lv4

Ikr, there's a shït ton of novels in WN that would prolly kill people's brain cells just from their introduction/prologue alone. While the actual good ones are either dropped OR on standby untill their "value" goes up. I got hooked into Lord of Enigma, prolly a week(?) ago and my ghad has it been pure hell just waiting for the 61st chapter.

Daoist249501
Daoist249501Lv3

I feel you bro. They stopped Soul Land IV and just when Soul Land 3 is almost over, plus IV had lots of support and had lots of people reading it🤦🏽‍♀️

LokiMaster:They also dropped It's Lonely To Be Invincible, Im The MC, Why Do I Suck At Cultivation? And Plague Doctor... I seriously don't understand the reason behind this? The novels were shown support had high ratings but they just decided to drop them? In return from some S H 1 T Y novels which have like 2-3.5 ratings and everybody hates them? Lastly the most annoying thing is there's no easy way to get in contact with the people of webnovel to even give any suggestions... smh
Daoist249501
Daoist249501Lv3

I feel you bro. They stopped Soul Land IV and just when Soul Land 3 is almost over, plus IV had lots of support and had lots of people reading it🤦🏽‍♀️

LokiMaster:They also dropped It's Lonely To Be Invincible, Im The MC, Why Do I Suck At Cultivation? And Plague Doctor... I seriously don't understand the reason behind this? The novels were shown support had high ratings but they just decided to drop them? In return from some S H 1 T Y novels which have like 2-3.5 ratings and everybody hates them? Lastly the most annoying thing is there's no easy way to get in contact with the people of webnovel to even give any suggestions... smh
ilegria
ilegriaLv6

Guess I'll try it then

Zayah
ZayahLv15

The main thing is, pay the translators. Give them a platform get the Rights reto translate and so much more translation Law related things.

Shiro_Kuro_2780:Is a $100,000 enough to build a tiny I don't know translating studio or something? Maybe I should make one and translate the dropped good novels. Or maybe I should just learn chinese
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Immortal_Boomstick
Immortal_BoomstickLv5

now im writing this review because the other people i have seen reviewing this are either butt hurt people cause their novel didn't get chosen or people who gives 5 star for some small reason i read most of the reviews but i haven't seen one that actually analyses the novel so ill do that. So first off Translation quality is 4,7 stars out of 5 This is mainly because of the fact that there are practically no grammar mistakes and the transitions are smooth enough said. Stability of updates 4,5 out of 5 since this hasn't come to web novel yet i cant expect much from it will probably upload a massive amount of chapter at first then slow down to 1 chapter a day or so and i cant really judge it so it will get a 4.5 from my expectations. Story development 2.8 out of 5 While it is an interesting story it has the feeling of many other novels that i have read that are interesting in the beginning and repetitive in the end not to mention there are a lot of cliches in this novel like a system, being a nice guy and unnaturally becoming loyal when they previously wanted to kill that guy. And to tell the truth it feels like hes bound to the world by the things the previous owner did i dont see a reason for him to rescue his disciple that betrayed him and i dont understand how that could offend the main character so the reasons are vague for what he does or why he does things these ways. Character design 3 out of 5 stars They are average but as i stated before they have unnaturally changed their personality from deadly psychos to loyal somewhat good dogs in around 1 or 2 months considering they have lived for at least a 100 years im surprised they could change that much by some major benefit The only other reason that can explain their personality changing that much is that they are acting cause they think their master can see everything but from their thought process that we are shown that is not very likely. World background 3.2 out of 5 It hasn't been developed much they practically put out some sect names witch the only ones of importance are nether sect heavenly something and clarity sect, after that they put out some cultivating rank thingy yet the only thing i remember are divine court something and eight Brahma something they haven't explained **** and i cant understand why they have done so. My personal opinion of this novel is that it is quite good but its not 5 star nor is it one star if this is you first read it i suggest you try it but if you are tired from cliches such as system Mc walking into traps that he could avoid if he was a bit more cold then dont do this novel the only good point is that i haven't seen a young master but considering his position i dont think a young master would dare trouble him. oh one more thing i dont think there will be romance so if you dont like that you should also try this novel for the people i talked about in the beginning im not trying to offend you by saying that you are butt hurt but im trying to say that its very childish to leave a review yet not having read the book same goes for keep up the good work 5 stars review im starting to have serious trust issues because of you reviews witch are made after reading some pages and being like wow i like this novel lets put some 5 star reviews i dont know what happens later in the story but i like this novel and i dont know how to judge a book so ill just say some word to fill in the word count. so ill end with this dont review a book without judging the book from all the point you've seen like translation character story dont just go for your personal opinion judge it from an objective position and see the logical false things and point that out since that will help a story much more than some 5 star or 1 star reviews.

TruthFalcon
TruthFalconLv2
HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv4

For those wondering I've read to 500 Chps in raws. It's a good story though it does have flaws. But first I strongly recommend you read the other Teacher/Senior Brother Novels first. Like {Master Of Untold Daos} It's really cool seeing him transmigrated into an old body, instead of facing Young Masters, he fights Old Foggies. It's extremely slow progress, we don't get into pills till the 350s. The first arc we find out MC old body regaining his youth back but it stops there. It's just gets very contradictory since the System becomes nonexistence. He's trying to break-through when it's unnecessary [He has the System for that after all.] It's get even weirder when it's mentioned "Will you let your country get trampled by a foreign race?". Which I find pretty stupid because they clearly didn't give a fudge in the beginning and let the world become chaotic. [Yes this novel gets into politics, a royal family which is pretty dam annoying since they're the antagonist/main-subject for over 200 chapters!] This is why I think the Author has his priorities wrong. It no longer feels like a Cultivation novel. I didn't mind the mesh of Wuxia elements at first, it's fine to temper yourself in the mortal world. (Every CN has a mortal arc at least once but this is too much!) The thing that bothers me the most is that even after 500 Chapters, The Author hasn't given anything to the Characters! Just a weapon. That's why I say the System becomes nonexistent. It makes me really sad and have mix feelings about this story.. I don't know what I should expect from this story anymore.

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