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ligaro75111
ligaro75111Lv24yr
2020-07-17 15:15

If you can compare it to other novels, it is like the korean novel Running away from the hero that combines with a system.. It has a bit of a different feel, but has the same plot of a funny instructor villain.. You are an instructor who trains villains and some disciple become a villain or a hero who loves you or wants to take your life like a tsundere or yandere... hahaha.. give it a try..

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EvilWolf
EvilWolfLv12

I'm at chapter 10 and it's getting me annoyed, I can already tell it's gonna be one of those, "make your disciples into hero's" ugh it's annoying I wanted him to stay a villain not change into someone "good"

Ms_Sha
Ms_ShaLv5

It gives the vibe of Shounen Ai 🤣

HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv4

All this story is missing is a good Yandere. I don't feel any 'Shounen AI' You're talking about.

HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv4

Or at least become Anti-Heroes along side with him

EvilWolf:I'm at chapter 10 and it's getting me annoyed, I can already tell it's gonna be one of those, "make your disciples into hero's" ugh it's annoying I wanted him to stay a villain not change into someone "good"
Max255
Max255Lv6

No point in reading. Like other novels, they will drop this and pick up trash.

VINTAGE_DUST
VINTAGE_DUSTLv12

It's good to know what other story the novel is similar to...it helps to decide if to give this novel a read...thanks for sharing!

Me_Personally7
Me_Personally7Lv2

Hey there. I was wondering if you had time to check out my fantasy Isekai novel, "New World Archeria" If interested, click my profile picture and start reading it today! (Not forcing you) Love you (even if you didn't)❤

EvilWolf:I'm at chapter 10 and it's getting me annoyed, I can already tell it's gonna be one of those, "make your disciples into hero's" ugh it's annoying I wanted him to stay a villain not change into someone "good"
Yxera_Alexis
Yxera_AlexisLv1

Do you know any novel or comic that does on here?

HolyDragon17:All this story is missing is a good Yandere. I don't feel any 'Shounen AI' You're talking about.
Evan_Perry
Evan_PerryLv1

E

SerBlueom
SerBlueomLv5

It hasnt really, More like neutral

EvilWolf:I'm at chapter 10 and it's getting me annoyed, I can already tell it's gonna be one of those, "make your disciples into hero's" ugh it's annoying I wanted him to stay a villain not change into someone "good"
Amdeadnow
AmdeadnowLv5

its gold

moodycrowl
moodycrowlLv1

Can you try my novel, "Rise of Void Dragons"? It'll be great if you like it and vote for it. I am participating in WPC with this novel.

desdodo
desdodoLv12

OMG if it's like running away from the hero it will become my new favorite novel. I always loved that novel and when the translations stopped it sucked so much. So if this is anything like it that would be great. Plus 15ch/ a week is insane so fast updates would be lit. Thx for the comment, I have to read it now.

Journey_Mingo
Journey_MingoLv3

I agree

GreatDaoofspace
GreatDaoofspaceLv15

Romance? Harem?

KHAJIQUE_KELLY
KHAJIQUE_KELLYLv13

Hey can you recommend some nice evil male lead stories

EvilWolf:I'm at chapter 10 and it's getting me annoyed, I can already tell it's gonna be one of those, "make your disciples into hero's" ugh it's annoying I wanted him to stay a villain not change into someone "good"
TechyBalake
TechyBalakeLv3

Don’t worry, he never becomes “good” he’s just not cartoonishly evil and doesn’t fly into a rage at every minuscule problem. He does what benefits him

EvilWolf:I'm at chapter 10 and it's getting me annoyed, I can already tell it's gonna be one of those, "make your disciples into hero's" ugh it's annoying I wanted him to stay a villain not change into someone "good"
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Immortal_Boomstick
Immortal_BoomstickLv5

now im writing this review because the other people i have seen reviewing this are either butt hurt people cause their novel didn't get chosen or people who gives 5 star for some small reason i read most of the reviews but i haven't seen one that actually analyses the novel so ill do that. So first off Translation quality is 4,7 stars out of 5 This is mainly because of the fact that there are practically no grammar mistakes and the transitions are smooth enough said. Stability of updates 4,5 out of 5 since this hasn't come to web novel yet i cant expect much from it will probably upload a massive amount of chapter at first then slow down to 1 chapter a day or so and i cant really judge it so it will get a 4.5 from my expectations. Story development 2.8 out of 5 While it is an interesting story it has the feeling of many other novels that i have read that are interesting in the beginning and repetitive in the end not to mention there are a lot of cliches in this novel like a system, being a nice guy and unnaturally becoming loyal when they previously wanted to kill that guy. And to tell the truth it feels like hes bound to the world by the things the previous owner did i dont see a reason for him to rescue his disciple that betrayed him and i dont understand how that could offend the main character so the reasons are vague for what he does or why he does things these ways. Character design 3 out of 5 stars They are average but as i stated before they have unnaturally changed their personality from deadly psychos to loyal somewhat good dogs in around 1 or 2 months considering they have lived for at least a 100 years im surprised they could change that much by some major benefit The only other reason that can explain their personality changing that much is that they are acting cause they think their master can see everything but from their thought process that we are shown that is not very likely. World background 3.2 out of 5 It hasn't been developed much they practically put out some sect names witch the only ones of importance are nether sect heavenly something and clarity sect, after that they put out some cultivating rank thingy yet the only thing i remember are divine court something and eight Brahma something they haven't explained **** and i cant understand why they have done so. My personal opinion of this novel is that it is quite good but its not 5 star nor is it one star if this is you first read it i suggest you try it but if you are tired from cliches such as system Mc walking into traps that he could avoid if he was a bit more cold then dont do this novel the only good point is that i haven't seen a young master but considering his position i dont think a young master would dare trouble him. oh one more thing i dont think there will be romance so if you dont like that you should also try this novel for the people i talked about in the beginning im not trying to offend you by saying that you are butt hurt but im trying to say that its very childish to leave a review yet not having read the book same goes for keep up the good work 5 stars review im starting to have serious trust issues because of you reviews witch are made after reading some pages and being like wow i like this novel lets put some 5 star reviews i dont know what happens later in the story but i like this novel and i dont know how to judge a book so ill just say some word to fill in the word count. so ill end with this dont review a book without judging the book from all the point you've seen like translation character story dont just go for your personal opinion judge it from an objective position and see the logical false things and point that out since that will help a story much more than some 5 star or 1 star reviews.

TruthFalcon
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HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv4

For those wondering I've read to 500 Chps in raws. It's a good story though it does have flaws. But first I strongly recommend you read the other Teacher/Senior Brother Novels first. Like {Master Of Untold Daos} It's really cool seeing him transmigrated into an old body, instead of facing Young Masters, he fights Old Foggies. It's extremely slow progress, we don't get into pills till the 350s. The first arc we find out MC old body regaining his youth back but it stops there. It's just gets very contradictory since the System becomes nonexistence. He's trying to break-through when it's unnecessary [He has the System for that after all.] It's get even weirder when it's mentioned "Will you let your country get trampled by a foreign race?". Which I find pretty stupid because they clearly didn't give a fudge in the beginning and let the world become chaotic. [Yes this novel gets into politics, a royal family which is pretty dam annoying since they're the antagonist/main-subject for over 200 chapters!] This is why I think the Author has his priorities wrong. It no longer feels like a Cultivation novel. I didn't mind the mesh of Wuxia elements at first, it's fine to temper yourself in the mortal world. (Every CN has a mortal arc at least once but this is too much!) The thing that bothers me the most is that even after 500 Chapters, The Author hasn't given anything to the Characters! Just a weapon. That's why I say the System becomes nonexistent. It makes me really sad and have mix feelings about this story.. I don't know what I should expect from this story anymore.

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