Zayah

please, even if its in chapter 300, Stop putting Everything here, and just put your Patreons link in here, and thanks, At the end of a chapter. im a Audio reader, and you cant Skip it, without taking your phone out.

fix this, it's a jumbled mess, I get what it's meant to say but its a cluster fvck, and needs editing.

wow, someone else reading around the same time as me. and you're right. have you read wind calamity? now that's a good fan fic. I maybe seen max 10 spelling or grammatical errors that wouldn't hurt the story or immersion in that. this however, besides the story being interesting, has had too many inconsistencies and wording errors, but the story logic still seems to be intact so far.

im getting angry AND Annoyed to laughter by this consistent word misuse. so far, THE ONLY CHARACTER THAT REQUIRES THE USE OF "Nee" IS THE AUNTY. Every other character that's used it has been WRONG, IT should be "Nii". the difference is like calling a Dog a Cat. a fish a Bird. but its even simpler, it's whether the character, which is established already as a Male or Female, whether -San or Sama, Also changes the dynamics. if you can't understand a 2 letter difference, don't use the gender specific word, and stick to English Brother or Sister. otherwise, I'm enjoying the story, but having constant emersion breaking words appear is absolutely no fun. additionally, the moment you added the small as it may be, anount of "($5)" in the patreon thing, I lost a bit of respect as a reader and current fan. Plugging your patreons acc was all you needed to do, its effective in the long run, so that was uncalled for additions.

Uchiha isn't the world, Konahas packing, the type je likes appears to be of Tsunade's design

mc be thinking he's another man from this pov, but we know he's just the Little Brother, HOWEVER, he is In Fact, the Nephew, so its Not unlikely in this worlds setting and supposed time period.

but its clear they're Spelt different.

relax, its not wind calamity, give them,some slack.even Fujins story started similarly.

yeah, I agree