Can only be said to be decent. It’s not good nor bad. It’s a system and eastern fantasy novel with a couple twists. It’s enjoyable to read and grammar is nice. However there are a couple bad character designs. Firstly, MC reincarnates and inherits a system. This system makes it so that he can exchange points for op items. The former soul had 9 disciples which were all evil since the former soul was evil as well. There are a couple plot holes in the story. For example, MC reincarnates as an evil person who had an extremely powerful soul and lived over 900 years. MC himself has lived for less than 30 years I’m assuming and has a weak soul. Apparently he inherits all the 900 years of memories and still stays the same? This doesn’t make sense at all. He should have had an extreme personality change at least but probably still should’ve lost his mind and started believing that he was the previous soul. After all, 900 years of life is a lot more than 30 years. He shouldn’t have been able to stay the same because he was just a mortal in his previous life, he didn’t have a powerful soul nor mind. He didn’t even have plot armor at this point. I’m guessing the author just forgot about this. Anyways, the next plot hole is that he doesn’t stay evil. He changes to good. This is really a major plot change since I personally came to read about an evil villain trying to control his disciples. I didn’t come here to see a goody-goody hero MC change his evil personality to good and also make his evil disciples into righteous disciples. The title and synopsis are very misleading in this case. It should be called, “My Good Disciples.” The synopsis should’ve stated all of this and I blame the translator/ author. Anyways, this really doesn’t make sense since the system is also a good system. The previous dude was evil but had a good system? This is a big plot hole. I don’t really like this novel because of how misleading it was. I read the title and synopsis and thought to myself how awesome this novel could be. I couldn’t wait to read about an evil MC who lost all his power try to control his evil disciples who would kill him if they knew he lost his powers. The system was kind of weird and random as it didn’t really fit in. I didn’t see the purpose of a system but I thought that it might be there to help the MC to gain his power and also to help make some arcs. But I was disappointed very quickly. The ‘evil’ Mc is actually a good hero. The evil disciples are actually becoming good disciples because of the MC. The system is a good system and it’s giving the evil MC missions to change to a good MC. This was really disappointing. The entire synopsis and title was completely wrong. Also I’m really sorry author but this plot sucks. I doubt you could keep this story going for longer than 200 chapters. If you do keep it going for longer, the quality will drop by so much that it will be able to cause a coma by reading it. If you make the MC progress to slow, the quality will drop by chapter 100. If you make him go at a medium speed, the quality will drop by chapter 175. If you make the MC go fast, the quality will drop by chapter 70. I wish you luck author. My advice is to make him go at medium speed and write maybe 200 chapters. I get that you’re being different but this really isn’t how you do it. You were supposed to get rid of the system. Keep the MC’s evilness. The plot should be that the MC is supposed to climb his way back up to the peak while keeping his disciples under check. It should’ve been like those reincarnated god novels where the MC reincarnates and has to start from scratch. However the disciples and evil mind personality would have given them a unique read. If you had done this, you would have been able to write 500 chapters of decent quality or either 300 chapters of excellent quality. Now that you’ve screwed the plot by making it a goody-goody MC, you can at best write 500 chapters of garbage quality or 200 chapters of decent quality.
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Greate review saved me a lot of time xD Thought the exact same as you when reading the title and synopsis. Didn't think he would be changing to good... Like I don't mind that mc wasn't like eat babies, kill everyone evil but would be nice to see an evil mc with some lines that he doesn't cross. Like say evil people eating babies that level, even killing those who cross his bottom line. If this makes any sense xD
my only question is does this review end on former or is the spoiler button making me not see the whole review?
ok great review very good but don't tell an author how to write their book give them advice how to make it better in the direction they want it to go but don't tell them they should of done it such and such way being the opposite of the direction they want it to go you saved me time though
"I'll remember what Master said and be a good person." It was fairly obvious it was gonna be that way as it’s literally in the last sentence of the synopsis
reason for him able to remain sane and the mysterious system is revealed later on
system's 'good missions' also has a reason behind it
