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HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv44yr
2020-07-24 11:19

For those wondering I've read to 500 Chps in raws. It's a good story though it does have flaws. But first I strongly recommend you read the other Teacher/Senior Brother Novels first. Like {Master Of Untold Daos} It's really cool seeing him transmigrated into an old body, instead of facing Young Masters, he fights Old Foggies. It's extremely slow progress, we don't get into pills till the 350s. The first arc we find out MC old body regaining his youth back but it stops there. It's just gets very contradictory since the System becomes nonexistence. He's trying to break-through when it's unnecessary [He has the System for that after all.] It's get even weirder when it's mentioned "Will you let your country get trampled by a foreign race?". Which I find pretty stupid because they clearly didn't give a fudge in the beginning and let the world become chaotic. [Yes this novel gets into politics, a royal family which is pretty dam annoying since they're the antagonist/main-subject for over 200 chapters!] This is why I think the Author has his priorities wrong. It no longer feels like a Cultivation novel. I didn't mind the mesh of Wuxia elements at first, it's fine to temper yourself in the mortal world. (Every CN has a mortal arc at least once but this is too much!) The thing that bothers me the most is that even after 500 Chapters, The Author hasn't given anything to the Characters! Just a weapon. That's why I say the System becomes nonexistent. It makes me really sad and have mix feelings about this story.. I don't know what I should expect from this story anymore.

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Circlethatone
CirclethatoneLv15

Thank you for this review 🙏 it was very helpful!

HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv4

I'm up to 851 now, The World Building and Character development is great. Maybe it's best to wait for chapters to accumulate till the politics is over with. I'm still a bit worried as I read on. Can't spoil anything but there are hints in the first 60chapters that wont show up till the 700s.

Circlethatone:Thank you for this review 🙏 it was very helpful!
HyeChoii
HyeChoiiLv11

does the mc get op or strong quickly or not ?

HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv4

So far he's always OP

HyeChoii:does the mc get op or strong quickly or not ?
Misguided_Rooster
Misguided_RoosterLv5

can you please tell me which site you read the raws from?

DriftingClouds90
DriftingClouds90Lv11

Yeah at first I thought it'll be good but after reading till 500+ i'm kind of losing interest . I thought the mc will regain a youthful appearance but so far he's still an old geezer.

TrollSect
TrollSectLv11

if you just open a chinese site and translate it with google translate, it's still quite readable.

Misguided_Rooster:can you please tell me which site you read the raws from?
Misguided_Rooster
Misguided_RoosterLv5

Which site are you reading from? I tried qidian but I need stones for chapters and I'm trying uukanshu or something like that but the Chinese to English translation is not as good as qidian. Can you give me a few sites?

TrollSect:if you just open a chinese site and translate it with google translate, it's still quite readable.
Heaveah
HeaveahLv5

Is there a harem?

HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv4

No Harem. But I have a slight wish for romance, it's possible when he gets young but who knows? I hope he doesn't be old the entire story.

Heaveah:Is there a harem?
needmorechapters
needmorechaptersLv4

So there's no Romance either ?

HolyDragon17:No Harem. But I have a slight wish for romance, it's possible when he gets young but who knows? I hope he doesn't be old the entire story.
payal_singh_6483
payal_singh_6483Lv2

i wanna ask do they have a second book? I'm still not cleared about the end.

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Immortal_Boomstick
Immortal_BoomstickLv5

now im writing this review because the other people i have seen reviewing this are either butt hurt people cause their novel didn't get chosen or people who gives 5 star for some small reason i read most of the reviews but i haven't seen one that actually analyses the novel so ill do that. So first off Translation quality is 4,7 stars out of 5 This is mainly because of the fact that there are practically no grammar mistakes and the transitions are smooth enough said. Stability of updates 4,5 out of 5 since this hasn't come to web novel yet i cant expect much from it will probably upload a massive amount of chapter at first then slow down to 1 chapter a day or so and i cant really judge it so it will get a 4.5 from my expectations. Story development 2.8 out of 5 While it is an interesting story it has the feeling of many other novels that i have read that are interesting in the beginning and repetitive in the end not to mention there are a lot of cliches in this novel like a system, being a nice guy and unnaturally becoming loyal when they previously wanted to kill that guy. And to tell the truth it feels like hes bound to the world by the things the previous owner did i dont see a reason for him to rescue his disciple that betrayed him and i dont understand how that could offend the main character so the reasons are vague for what he does or why he does things these ways. Character design 3 out of 5 stars They are average but as i stated before they have unnaturally changed their personality from deadly psychos to loyal somewhat good dogs in around 1 or 2 months considering they have lived for at least a 100 years im surprised they could change that much by some major benefit The only other reason that can explain their personality changing that much is that they are acting cause they think their master can see everything but from their thought process that we are shown that is not very likely. World background 3.2 out of 5 It hasn't been developed much they practically put out some sect names witch the only ones of importance are nether sect heavenly something and clarity sect, after that they put out some cultivating rank thingy yet the only thing i remember are divine court something and eight Brahma something they haven't explained **** and i cant understand why they have done so. My personal opinion of this novel is that it is quite good but its not 5 star nor is it one star if this is you first read it i suggest you try it but if you are tired from cliches such as system Mc walking into traps that he could avoid if he was a bit more cold then dont do this novel the only good point is that i haven't seen a young master but considering his position i dont think a young master would dare trouble him. oh one more thing i dont think there will be romance so if you dont like that you should also try this novel for the people i talked about in the beginning im not trying to offend you by saying that you are butt hurt but im trying to say that its very childish to leave a review yet not having read the book same goes for keep up the good work 5 stars review im starting to have serious trust issues because of you reviews witch are made after reading some pages and being like wow i like this novel lets put some 5 star reviews i dont know what happens later in the story but i like this novel and i dont know how to judge a book so ill just say some word to fill in the word count. so ill end with this dont review a book without judging the book from all the point you've seen like translation character story dont just go for your personal opinion judge it from an objective position and see the logical false things and point that out since that will help a story much more than some 5 star or 1 star reviews.

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