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Daoist_MakerLv153yr
2021-04-25 06:51

Story concepts are decent the in game world is okay but overall the story givers the feeling of being a naïve 15 year old boy's fantasy. The mc is a bit dim and the girls are all simple, easy and gullible, supposed to be based in America but it doesn't feel like the author has even read about the country and so doesn't understand the culture, social norms, economy, politics etcetera it feels more like a weird China or Korea I'm at chapter 144, and I want to like the story because the idea is cool, but between the inconsistencies, plot holes, shallow emotionless characters, bulky plot armor and jarring disconnect between the setting and the culture I'd rather spend my coins elsewhere...

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