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Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthor4yr
2020-07-03 00:25

A story that I Promise you won't regret reading if you read 80 chapters (Free) and most probably you will fall in love with it. Important: STORY: The story is about a person who dies in the game and gets a system that brought him back in time. The system isn't simple though and it gives Ryder missions that force him to do the stuff that he don't want to save his life, but there is a reason for all that. You would get to know about that if you atleast read the free chapters of the story. It's not a story about a slave to the system but about something that goes way back than this life and world. The system does all this for Ryder in a sense. The MC will be an OP MC which would be way amazing when you get to understand the inkling of the true mystery (Chapter 79 or somewhere around that). CHARACTERS: The Important Characters are all given a personality of their own which most will love. There are gods, Hobbits, Elves, cultivators, and everything one could ask for which starts to make sense from chapter 70 onwards where the seriousness of the story really gets a grip. Non Important Characters are intentionally made to overreact in certain situations which is supposed to be stupid and added in the story to give it a lighter touch. You would enjoy it if you don't think to much about that, as that's made to be like that, but that don't affect the seriousness of the story in any way. Writing Quality: There might be a few grammer mistakes but nothing major that will affect reading experience. Stability of updates: The story updates daily with mass release occasionally. It won't be dropped either like all of my stories. World Background: The world is much more extensive than the simple Real world and the game world which I hope most will like. Read more to know more. For more info: Read chapter 0

Divinity: Against the Godly System

Demonic_angel
4.6
671 Chs

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AM06
AM06Lv11

You’re right, I read it and I’m obsessed.

4yr
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MJAgo
MJAgoLv14

Ok in your first book that I read , the romance part of story and harem relationship building was lacking so much, and here in this one we have 3 important tags of harem/romance/R-18 so im just gonna ask is this story have a proper romantic and relationship building with some real lovey dovy scenes? Cuz your first work made me doubt your skills in writing romance part of the story and those chapters appeared every 50+ chapters which was weird for a novel with a romance/harem tags so is this one different or its the same style of your first work?!

4yr
11
SumGai
SumGaiLv11

Not really? it's not as frequent as every chapter, but at least every dozen of chapters there is a romantic scene. R-18 doesn't exist tho. I still don't know why tbh something about some dumbass reporting the story? I really don't get it

MJAgo:Ok in your first book that I read , the romance part of story and harem relationship building was lacking so much, and here in this one we have 3 important tags of harem/romance/R-18 so im just gonna ask is this story have a proper romantic and relationship building with some real lovey dovy scenes? Cuz your first work made me doubt your skills in writing romance part of the story and those chapters appeared every 50+ chapters which was weird for a novel with a romance/harem tags so is this one different or its the same style of your first work?!
4yr
4
DaoistGNnNFX
DaoistGNnNFXLv14

I’m looking forward to the later chapters!

4yr
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Crycks
CrycksLv14

And the system name is janus. Here i drop

4yr
5
Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthor

That's a real Greek god name, and everyone that reads it and confuse it with something else pronounce it wrong.

Crycks:And the system name is janus. Here i drop
4yr
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Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthor

But you're free to drop it. Thank you for commenting :)

Demonic_angel:That's a real Greek god name, and everyone that reads it and confuse it with something else pronounce it wrong.
4yr
4
Crycks
CrycksLv14

Greek god or not the name is awefull

Demonic_angel:That's a real Greek god name, and everyone that reads it and confuse it with something else pronounce it wrong.
4yr
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Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthor

It's ja-nus. I can't do anything of people pronounce it wrong ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Crycks:Greek god or not the name is awefull
4yr
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Crycks
CrycksLv14

Proud to have contributed to you day’s happiness. Yeah for awful im not really good with english (just reading not writing). As for name for me its easy, if you give that name to a kid and he get bullied because of it then its not a good name. And with that name, if he is a bit shy then he would be trashed his whole childhood (even after with adults mentality today). So thats how i judge bad names :S After that i just gave my piece of mind, i did not put a rated review because i dont like a name.

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4yr
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Crycks
CrycksLv14

Proud to have contributed to you day’s happiness. Yeah for awful im not really good with english (just reading not writing). As for name for me its easy, if you give that name to a kid and he get bullied because of it then its not a good name. And with that name, if he is a bit shy then he would be trashed his whole childhood (even after with adults mentality today). So thats how i judge bad names :S After that i just gave my piece of mind, i did not put a rated review because i dont like a name.

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Lissa_356
Lissa_356Lv11

You're right it's a good story

4yr
Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv5

Damn you got even more offended than the author 🤣.

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4yr
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Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv5

Janus is a female name no?

Crycks:Proud to have contributed to you day’s happiness. Yeah for awful im not really good with english (just reading not writing). As for name for me its easy, if you give that name to a kid and he get bullied because of it then its not a good name. And with that name, if he is a bit shy then he would be trashed his whole childhood (even after with adults mentality today). So thats how i judge bad names :S After that i just gave my piece of mind, i did not put a rated review because i dont like a name.
4yr
Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv5

Thank you for writing a detailed review about your novel :D, it really helps me decide on reading or not! Unfortunately this won't be a pick for me, but I still want to say thanks since most authors don't do this!

4yr
aimanimi
aimanimiLv12

me too

AM06:You’re right, I read it and I’m obsessed.
4yr
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AsuraTheReaper
AsuraTheReaperLv14

Hey author is there really going to be r18 scene

4yr
Frankenstein_1885
Frankenstein_1885Lv3

this is your typical novel with butt slaping xD , anyway i like it, i bet that the Vampire King has the Blood Crystal

4yr
1
21man
21manLv15

will they be R-18 things in this novel or not

4yr
1
AsunaKaoru
AsunaKaoruLv13

Yes I feel regret I feel regret so hard that my free passes are always going nil

4yr
Other Reviews
Cricker
CrickerLv1

A story about a clueless reincarnated god that enters a game which is basically another world and gains an item made by his past life(God Version) and, unknowingly, works toward regaining his true self by completing the broken artifact made by his past life. Basically, if you have read [Shura's Wrath], this is it's brother novel.

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Redgar_347
Redgar_347Lv12

A story worth spending coins.....the characters to the dual world setting (vr and real) is amazing. Yeah in the starting chapter Janus was quite annoying but everything he did was due to a reason so the one de dropping it due that reason... you're missing something too amazing

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DarkDragonGoddess
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Reveal spoiler

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wit_daface
wit_dafaceLv4

The book starts off ok the plot is a bit slow and cliche but was overall decent. that is until the fbi is brought in the mc becomes careless leaving all types of holes for him to be captured ..im not into reading about beta, soft hearted, or easy to manipulate mcs. Unfortunately the mc fits two of those categories. This is my main reason for dropping....good luck to the author

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Daoist689073
Daoist689073Lv3

Its.... something. I cant say the novel is horrible, but in several instances the writing quality and ideas behind it leave a lot to be desired. Theres a lot of forced interactions and "humor" that seems like the author is trying to inject into the story, but to me at least it comes off a little forced. The author tries to make the system a mix between helpful and controlling, which ends up feeling weird because its hard to tell if its actually trying to assist the MC, just mess with his life, or force him to follow its agenda. Supposedly, some people came to this novel in promise of romance or sex scenes or whatever, but if thats the case i suggest you look elsewhere as the author skirts around those. Admittedly, im not up to the current chapters so some of these problems may have been fixed later on, but up to chapter 50 at least you'll definitely see many of these issues.

4yr
Great_Young_Master
Great_Young_MasterLv11

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Mysterious_Pandora
Mysterious_PandoraLv3

This novel is unique and interesting in my opinion. Keep up the release rate and you are destined to be in top 10! About the story: World is not too detailed but this helps the story progressing. Balance between real the world and virtual reality is good. You will not get confused. Not much grammar errors. The story is progressing in good pace. Good flirting and R-16 scenes. Advice: Do not repeat the last sentence of the previous chapter in the next chapter. That's just takes up the space. You can add a bit more details and use a wider range of words. I don't know how the MC looks like, please change this! (This review is made when the novel just started and I will change it as time passes. Hope everyone gained something from this post.)

4yr
NWOK
NWOKLv4

amazing novel until 200 Chapter after 183 Chapter it becomes concidence chichè. let's take one example trying to find one organisation and by mistakes mc got wind from totally different sources nothing to do fbi(until later) guess what fbi also got it same time . guess what they meet on airport . guess what when they were leaving they sit on same chairs. guess what they again meet after 3 or 5 chapter totally different situation but same fbi ppl . guess what you can bleed in game guess what it will not disappear . guess what npc are I intelligence that they can tell what species it is just after seeing blood. guess what vampire king is idiot king . (who make him king?) . guess what FBI can find out what mc did in last hour but couldn't find a blast which is going to happen in park (solved because of mc).

4yr
Alex_Willians
Alex_WilliansLv3

i think that with the mc statistics his battle power should be higher; he could fight against level 25 or + monster while on level 19 or 20. the novel has the harem tag but no much focus on it apparently I think I should focus on it a little and the personality of the MC so far is great. **:i have a question?how is the appearance of mc? is he diabolically handsome or just a guy with medium appearance

4yr
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