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Demonic_angelAuthor4yr
2020-07-02 16:25

A story that I Promise you won't regret reading if you read 80 chapters (Free) and most probably you will fall in love with it. Important: STORY: The story is about a person who dies in the game and gets a system that brought him back in time. The system isn't simple though and it gives Ryder missions that force him to do the stuff that he don't want to save his life, but there is a reason for all that. You would get to know about that if you atleast read the free chapters of the story. It's not a story about a slave to the system but about something that goes way back than this life and world. The system does all this for Ryder in a sense. The MC will be an OP MC which would be way amazing when you get to understand the inkling of the true mystery (Chapter 79 or somewhere around that). CHARACTERS: The Important Characters are all given a personality of their own which most will love. There are gods, Hobbits, Elves, cultivators, and everything one could ask for which starts to make sense from chapter 70 onwards where the seriousness of the story really gets a grip. Non Important Characters are intentionally made to overreact in certain situations which is supposed to be stupid and added in the story to give it a lighter touch. You would enjoy it if you don't think to much about that, as that's made to be like that, but that don't affect the seriousness of the story in any way. Writing Quality: There might be a few grammer mistakes but nothing major that will affect reading experience. Stability of updates: The story updates daily with mass release occasionally. It won't be dropped either like all of my stories. World Background: The world is much more extensive than the simple Real world and the game world which I hope most will like. Read more to know more. For more info: Read chapter 0

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AM06Lv11

You’re right, I read it and I’m obsessed.

MJAgoLv14

Ok in your first book that I read , the romance part of story and harem relationship building was lacking so much, and here in this one we have 3 important tags of harem/romance/R-18 so im just gonna ask is this story have a proper romantic and relationship building with some real lovey dovy scenes? Cuz your first work made me doubt your skills in writing romance part of the story and those chapters appeared every 50+ chapters which was weird for a novel with a romance/harem tags so is this one different or its the same style of your first work?!

SumGaiLv11

Not really? it's not as frequent as every chapter, but at least every dozen of chapters there is a romantic scene. R-18 doesn't exist tho. I still don't know why tbh something about some dumbass reporting the story? I really don't get it

MJAgo:Ok in your first book that I read , the romance part of story and harem relationship building was lacking so much, and here in this one we have 3 important tags of harem/romance/R-18 so im just gonna ask is this story have a proper romantic and relationship building with some real lovey dovy scenes? Cuz your first work made me doubt your skills in writing romance part of the story and those chapters appeared every 50+ chapters which was weird for a novel with a romance/harem tags so is this one different or its the same style of your first work?!
DaoistGNnNFXLv14

I’m looking forward to the later chapters!

CrycksLv14

And the system name is janus. Here i drop

Demonic_angelAuthor

That's a real Greek god name, and everyone that reads it and confuse it with something else pronounce it wrong.

Crycks:And the system name is janus. Here i drop
Demonic_angelAuthor

But you're free to drop it. Thank you for commenting :)

Demonic_angel:That's a real Greek god name, and everyone that reads it and confuse it with something else pronounce it wrong.
CrycksLv14

Greek god or not the name is awefull

Demonic_angel:That's a real Greek god name, and everyone that reads it and confuse it with something else pronounce it wrong.
Demonic_angelAuthor

It's ja-nus. I can't do anything of people pronounce it wrong ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Crycks:Greek god or not the name is awefull
CrycksLv14

Proud to have contributed to you day’s happiness. Yeah for awful im not really good with english (just reading not writing). As for name for me its easy, if you give that name to a kid and he get bullied because of it then its not a good name. And with that name, if he is a bit shy then he would be trashed his whole childhood (even after with adults mentality today). So thats how i judge bad names :S After that i just gave my piece of mind, i did not put a rated review because i dont like a name.

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CrycksLv14

Proud to have contributed to you day’s happiness. Yeah for awful im not really good with english (just reading not writing). As for name for me its easy, if you give that name to a kid and he get bullied because of it then its not a good name. And with that name, if he is a bit shy then he would be trashed his whole childhood (even after with adults mentality today). So thats how i judge bad names :S After that i just gave my piece of mind, i did not put a rated review because i dont like a name.

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Lissa_356Lv12

You're right it's a good story

OmnidoaLv5

Damn you got even more offended than the author 🤣.

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OmnidoaLv5

Janus is a female name no?

Crycks:Proud to have contributed to you day’s happiness. Yeah for awful im not really good with english (just reading not writing). As for name for me its easy, if you give that name to a kid and he get bullied because of it then its not a good name. And with that name, if he is a bit shy then he would be trashed his whole childhood (even after with adults mentality today). So thats how i judge bad names :S After that i just gave my piece of mind, i did not put a rated review because i dont like a name.
OmnidoaLv5

Thank you for writing a detailed review about your novel :D, it really helps me decide on reading or not! Unfortunately this won't be a pick for me, but I still want to say thanks since most authors don't do this!

aimanimiLv12

me too

AM06:You’re right, I read it and I’m obsessed.
AsuraTheReaperLv14

Hey author is there really going to be r18 scene

Frankenstein_1885Lv3

this is your typical novel with butt slaping xD , anyway i like it, i bet that the Vampire King has the Blood Crystal

21manLv15

will they be R-18 things in this novel or not

AsunaKaoruLv13

Yes I feel regret I feel regret so hard that my free passes are always going nil

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