amazing novel until 200 Chapter after 183 Chapter it becomes concidence chichè. let's take one example trying to find one organisation and by mistakes mc got wind from totally different sources nothing to do fbi(until later) guess what fbi also got it same time . guess what they meet on airport . guess what when they were leaving they sit on same chairs. guess what they again meet after 3 or 5 chapter totally different situation but same fbi ppl . guess what you can bleed in game guess what it will not disappear . guess what npc are I intelligence that they can tell what species it is just after seeing blood. guess what vampire king is idiot king . (who make him king?) . guess what FBI can find out what mc did in last hour but couldn't find a blast which is going to happen in park (solved because of mc).
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LIKEsometimes, coincidences are what make a novel good, I dont go into novels thinking that it's perfect bc the ratings n replies left... I go into them expecting trash, that's how I deal with it, at least... coincidences make a fantasy novel a fantasy novel, otherwise, how will it advance normally? either way.. this is my opinion, different ppl have different opinions, but i would't go into novels thinking that they are amazing, it just ruins it if I had put too much expectaions on it and it didn't reach... that's just me though, idk bout you... but, just do you idc, just tryna give advise of how I see it... dont mind too much...