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HappyThing
HappyThingLv154yr
2020-08-03 00:55

The author has done such a great job writing this story, he took the going back in time reincarnation thing and has done something truly different with it. The mc has so many great abilities, along with the brain to use them to their greatest potential. There is also a great use of the butterfly effect which brings unexpected events and results from the MC's actions which he never expected so it is very fresh compared to those other characters who know how everything happens and start freaking out when the timeline changes, while this MC notices that somethings have changed, but accepts it. My only regret about this story is that it is so good I read all 159 chapters (current amount released) in one day and I'm still wanting more hahaha.

Divinity: Against the Godly System

Demonic_angel
4.6
671 Chs

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Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthor

Thank you for Reading :)

4yr
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HappyThing
HappyThingLv15

Update now that the book is almost at chapter 300. It just keeps getting better, mc shows clear character progression and while some characters might give off a feeling like they have been forgotten by the author it is only because these characters do not have an overly large role in the main part of the story. It is kind of hard for me to say anything that I really love about the story without spoiling it.

4yr
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Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthor

A story that I Promise you won't regret reading if you read 80 chapters (Free) and most probably you will fall in love with it. Important: STORY: The story is about a person who dies in the game and gets a system that brought him back in time. The system isn't simple though and it gives Ryder missions that force him to do the stuff that he don't want to save his life, but there is a reason for all that. You would get to know about that if you atleast read the free chapters of the story. It's not a story about a slave to the system but about something that goes way back than this life and world. The system does all this for Ryder in a sense. The MC will be an OP MC which would be way amazing when you get to understand the inkling of the true mystery (Chapter 79 or somewhere around that). CHARACTERS: The Important Characters are all given a personality of their own which most will love. There are gods, Hobbits, Elves, cultivators, and everything one could ask for which starts to make sense from chapter 70 onwards where the seriousness of the story really gets a grip. Non Important Characters are intentionally made to overreact in certain situations which is supposed to be stupid and added in the story to give it a lighter touch. You would enjoy it if you don't think to much about that, as that's made to be like that, but that don't affect the seriousness of the story in any way. Writing Quality: There might be a few grammer mistakes but nothing major that will affect reading experience. Stability of updates: The story updates daily with mass release occasionally. It won't be dropped either like all of my stories. World Background: The world is much more extensive than the simple Real world and the game world which I hope most will like. Read more to know more. For more info: Read chapter 0

4yr

Cricker
CrickerLv1

A story about a clueless reincarnated god that enters a game which is basically another world and gains an item made by his past life(God Version) and, unknowingly, works toward regaining his true self by completing the broken artifact made by his past life. Basically, if you have read [Shura's Wrath], this is it's brother novel.

4yr
Redgar_347
Redgar_347Lv12

A story worth spending coins.....the characters to the dual world setting (vr and real) is amazing. Yeah in the starting chapter Janus was quite annoying but everything he did was due to a reason so the one de dropping it due that reason... you're missing something too amazing

4yr
DarkDragonGoddess
DarkDragonGoddessLv6

Reveal spoiler

4yr
wit_daface
wit_dafaceLv4

The book starts off ok the plot is a bit slow and cliche but was overall decent. that is until the fbi is brought in the mc becomes careless leaving all types of holes for him to be captured ..im not into reading about beta, soft hearted, or easy to manipulate mcs. Unfortunately the mc fits two of those categories. This is my main reason for dropping....good luck to the author

4yr
Daoist689073
Daoist689073Lv3

Its.... something. I cant say the novel is horrible, but in several instances the writing quality and ideas behind it leave a lot to be desired. Theres a lot of forced interactions and "humor" that seems like the author is trying to inject into the story, but to me at least it comes off a little forced. The author tries to make the system a mix between helpful and controlling, which ends up feeling weird because its hard to tell if its actually trying to assist the MC, just mess with his life, or force him to follow its agenda. Supposedly, some people came to this novel in promise of romance or sex scenes or whatever, but if thats the case i suggest you look elsewhere as the author skirts around those. Admittedly, im not up to the current chapters so some of these problems may have been fixed later on, but up to chapter 50 at least you'll definitely see many of these issues.

4yr
Great_Young_Master
Great_Young_MasterLv11

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Mysterious_Pandora
Mysterious_PandoraLv3

This novel is unique and interesting in my opinion. Keep up the release rate and you are destined to be in top 10! About the story: World is not too detailed but this helps the story progressing. Balance between real the world and virtual reality is good. You will not get confused. Not much grammar errors. The story is progressing in good pace. Good flirting and R-16 scenes. Advice: Do not repeat the last sentence of the previous chapter in the next chapter. That's just takes up the space. You can add a bit more details and use a wider range of words. I don't know how the MC looks like, please change this! (This review is made when the novel just started and I will change it as time passes. Hope everyone gained something from this post.)

4yr
NWOK
NWOKLv4

amazing novel until 200 Chapter after 183 Chapter it becomes concidence chichè. let's take one example trying to find one organisation and by mistakes mc got wind from totally different sources nothing to do fbi(until later) guess what fbi also got it same time . guess what they meet on airport . guess what when they were leaving they sit on same chairs. guess what they again meet after 3 or 5 chapter totally different situation but same fbi ppl . guess what you can bleed in game guess what it will not disappear . guess what npc are I intelligence that they can tell what species it is just after seeing blood. guess what vampire king is idiot king . (who make him king?) . guess what FBI can find out what mc did in last hour but couldn't find a blast which is going to happen in park (solved because of mc).

4yr
Alex_Willians
Alex_WilliansLv3

i think that with the mc statistics his battle power should be higher; he could fight against level 25 or + monster while on level 19 or 20. the novel has the harem tag but no much focus on it apparently I think I should focus on it a little and the personality of the MC so far is great. **:i have a question?how is the appearance of mc? is he diabolically handsome or just a guy with medium appearance

4yr
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