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WolfSpatialLv124yr
2020-11-14 03:12

This was such a good book... until it became a harem. I cant stand harems, and I dont understand everyone elses obsession with them either. Anyway, if you’re into harems, this book is for you, but if you dont hate yourself, read something else.

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CommonnerferAuthor

Can i just say i was pressured into writing the harem and dont plan on it for any of my other books. I wanted it to be just Ruby orginally.

CommonnerferAuthor

Now that i have written A “harem novel” I hate how much harder it is to write. trying to make each character seem like themselves rather than a cardboard cut out and a shallow lesser version of themselves is so much harder. i feel like i broke the orginal characters doing this and it hurt me writing it but im to far in and will finish this story. Never expect another harems story from me again.

Commonnerfer:Can i just say i was pressured into writing the harem and dont plan on it for any of my other books. I wanted it to be just Ruby orginally.
SpelloyalLv12

To be honest I believe that your biggest mistake came when new girls outside the RWBY world were added to the harem. It was very forced and there was no room for the relationship to develop so it looked like just a playboy collecting members of the harem. Hell lily and kushina were practically forced into the harem as soon as they were resurrected and before they even knew the name of the mc

Commonnerfer:Now that i have written A “harem novel” I hate how much harder it is to write. trying to make each character seem like themselves rather than a cardboard cut out and a shallow lesser version of themselves is so much harder. i feel like i broke the orginal characters doing this and it hurt me writing it but im to far in and will finish this story. Never expect another harems story from me again.
maelvoid_2025Lv4

more like collecting Pokemon 😂

Spelloyal:To be honest I believe that your biggest mistake came when new girls outside the RWBY world were added to the harem. It was very forced and there was no room for the relationship to develop so it looked like just a playboy collecting members of the harem. Hell lily and kushina were practically forced into the harem as soon as they were resurrected and before they even knew the name of the mc
Xnet4Lv1

At least someone reasonable stayed on this platform, I'm glad you share my opinion! I totally agree that a harem is for the underdeveloped. It's a pity that the author didn't specify the tag, I wouldn't even read this garbage.

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