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WolfSpatial
WolfSpatialLv124yr
2020-11-14 11:12

This was such a good book... until it became a harem. I cant stand harems, and I dont understand everyone elses obsession with them either. Anyway, if you’re into harems, this book is for you, but if you dont hate yourself, read something else.

An Endless New Dream

Commonnerfer
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480 Chs

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Commonnerfer
CommonnerferAuthor

Can i just say i was pressured into writing the harem and dont plan on it for any of my other books. I wanted it to be just Ruby orginally.

4yr
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Commonnerfer
CommonnerferAuthor

Now that i have written A “harem novel” I hate how much harder it is to write. trying to make each character seem like themselves rather than a cardboard cut out and a shallow lesser version of themselves is so much harder. i feel like i broke the orginal characters doing this and it hurt me writing it but im to far in and will finish this story. Never expect another harems story from me again.

Commonnerfer:Can i just say i was pressured into writing the harem and dont plan on it for any of my other books. I wanted it to be just Ruby orginally.
4yr
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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

To be honest I believe that your biggest mistake came when new girls outside the RWBY world were added to the harem. It was very forced and there was no room for the relationship to develop so it looked like just a playboy collecting members of the harem. Hell lily and kushina were practically forced into the harem as soon as they were resurrected and before they even knew the name of the mc

Commonnerfer:Now that i have written A “harem novel” I hate how much harder it is to write. trying to make each character seem like themselves rather than a cardboard cut out and a shallow lesser version of themselves is so much harder. i feel like i broke the orginal characters doing this and it hurt me writing it but im to far in and will finish this story. Never expect another harems story from me again.
4yr
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maelvoid_2025
maelvoid_2025Lv4

more like collecting Pokemon 😂

Spelloyal:To be honest I believe that your biggest mistake came when new girls outside the RWBY world were added to the harem. It was very forced and there was no room for the relationship to develop so it looked like just a playboy collecting members of the harem. Hell lily and kushina were practically forced into the harem as soon as they were resurrected and before they even knew the name of the mc
4yr
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Zovovoz
ZovovozLv1

At least someone reasonable stayed on this platform, I'm glad you share my opinion! I totally agree that a harem is for the underdeveloped. It's a pity that the author didn't specify the tag, I wouldn't even read this garbage.

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TheSlumberingWolf
TheSlumberingWolfLv4

The only thing underdeveloped is your IQ.

Zovovoz:At least someone reasonable stayed on this platform, I'm glad you share my opinion! I totally agree that a harem is for the underdeveloped. It's a pity that the author didn't specify the tag, I wouldn't even read this garbage.
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Zovovoz
ZovovozLv1

I agree, I’m not the smartest person, but envy is a bad feeling, and if you don’t feel it at all, there’s no need to loudly declare it.

TheSlumberingWolf:The only thing underdeveloped is your IQ.
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TheSlumberingWolf
TheSlumberingWolfLv4

Why would I feel envy over your stunted intellect? Since you brought it up however, I can only assume that it must be that you're just projecting your own insecurities onto others.

Zovovoz:I agree, I’m not the smartest person, but envy is a bad feeling, and if you don’t feel it at all, there’s no need to loudly declare it.
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Zovovoz
ZovovozLv1

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TheSlumberingWolf:Why would I feel envy over your stunted intellect? Since you brought it up however, I can only assume that it must be that you're just projecting your own insecurities onto others.
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Zovovoz
ZovovozLv1

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TheSlumberingWolf:Why would I feel envy over your stunted intellect? Since you brought it up however, I can only assume that it must be that you're just projecting your own insecurities onto others.
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TheSlumberingWolf
TheSlumberingWolfLv4

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Zovovoz
ZovovozLv1

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