I'm going a neutral review. I didn't last very long in the story for several reasons. I understand that this is fanfiction and I'm not far enough to judge the raw writing material however it seems to be updated regylarly but the series starts out from the get go with the requirement of you having knowledge of the following series dragonball z and all it includes fallout the fallout game universe and the games mechanics Ruby another successfull anime i personally haven't watched and what it includes. I suspect there is a few i might have missed but without prior knowledge of the following series will you as a reader be hopelessly lost in regards to what is going on, as it is not explained but is assumed you already know everything that is required to be known. I wish the author best of luck with the series and I will likely try to give it another shot if I ever get around to watching ruwby and try to update my review around it. so the tldr from my perspective do I recommend you skip this or seek out all the prior series and attain the knowledge required to enjoy it before you engage with this novel. if you do have the prior series under your belt do I think it is worth giving a shot.
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Can i just say I have never once Watched dragonball...
Well read the manga then ? atleast you mention her being a sayain and the tail being a weakness unless trained, its in one of your very first chapters. I personally only ended up hopelessly lost when it came to the ruby references. :)
I simply assumed since you had started by including it as her race and had done the tail reference that you later on would include more stuff from dragonball probably in form of power up or etc in sayain nature that would require knowledge of that universe
Yeah no never seen it. most my my knowledge about sayians are from death battle
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