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Commonnerfer
CommonnerferAuthor5yr
2020-04-10 00:43

I don’t think I have ever shamelessly rated my own book before. Wanted to give it a try. I don’t see what’s so special about it? Put a lot of work into this book with research and stuff. First try at an adventure/romance still not comfortable writing those R-18 chapters so it might take awhile before I’m willing to try that.

An Endless New Dream

Commonnerfer
4.6
480 Chs

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Lord_Snow
Lord_SnowLv6

Yuri?

5yr
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Master_Sigil
Master_SigilLv6

Sorry to offense you but your summary suck.

5yr
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Commonnerfer
CommonnerferAuthor

Yeah wrote that before I actually started writing the story.

Master_Sigil:Sorry to offense you but your summary suck.
5yr
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Master_Sigil
Master_SigilLv6

Think you could do better? You may end up with more wanting readers as they might like your edited summary.

Commonnerfer:Yeah wrote that before I actually started writing the story.
5yr
8
Nixolas_Zinn
Nixolas_ZinnLv3

tbh the only reason I don't immediately read it, is the fact you had the word "Pipboy" in there.

5yr
5
Commonnerfer
CommonnerferAuthor

The computer from fallout...

Nixolas_Zinn:tbh the only reason I don't immediately read it, is the fact you had the word "Pipboy" in there.
5yr
3
Sora_Nai
Sora_NaiLv11

Meh, I don't feel like you need R-18 scenes for this. Personally I enjoy the current fluffyness, but to each their own.

5yr
3
Commonnerfer
CommonnerferAuthor

Yeah I will probably never write a full lemon. However I will probably hint at it.

Sora_Nai:Meh, I don't feel like you need R-18 scenes for this. Personally I enjoy the current fluffyness, but to each their own.
5yr
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Nixolas_Zinn
Nixolas_ZinnLv3

I'll give a proper review at 25 or so, I realized there's a lot of faults in my old one, see ya then, sorry for the inconvenience

5yr
1
Commonnerfer
CommonnerferAuthor

It’s fine enjoy the book. One final left so I’m going to get back to studying.

Nixolas_Zinn:I'll give a proper review at 25 or so, I realized there's a lot of faults in my old one, see ya then, sorry for the inconvenience
5yr
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Shadewind
ShadewindLv6

Who is the goddess lover .......? Is it mc .....?

Commonnerfer:It’s fine enjoy the book. One final left so I’m going to get back to studying.
5yr
1
conwall
conwallLv14

Thank you for your work. Your books always but a smile on my face no matter what. be it a reference or the absurdity of the content thanks for the hard work

4yr
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Davve
DavveLv4

You have done a good job with this book. :)

4yr
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ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

Harem?

4yr
ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

Harem?

Commonnerfer:Yeah I will probably never write a full lemon. However I will probably hint at it.
4yr
Cameron_Baxley
Cameron_BaxleyLv3

is your sandstorm book finished or just put aside for know?

4yr
Commonnerfer
CommonnerferAuthor

That one is done. sadly it was my first book so it kinda had a lot of holes and no planned ending. that doenst mean the characters wont make appearances in my other books they definitely will. Its just i kinda was having issues jumping from world to world no end goal in mind. so i found a way to end it, then i have 3 other books in progress i just have to focus on this one because its nearing its second end, kinda overshot the first one(love witing it and wanted to fill some plot holes). so this one has a mini arc before the final one becaue i have to prepare stuff.

Cameron_Baxley:is your sandstorm book finished or just put aside for know?
4yr
Cameron_Baxley
Cameron_BaxleyLv3

ok I was just wondering and I thought it was a good and interesting book and extremely entertaining.

Commonnerfer:That one is done. sadly it was my first book so it kinda had a lot of holes and no planned ending. that doenst mean the characters wont make appearances in my other books they definitely will. Its just i kinda was having issues jumping from world to world no end goal in mind. so i found a way to end it, then i have 3 other books in progress i just have to focus on this one because its nearing its second end, kinda overshot the first one(love witing it and wanted to fill some plot holes). so this one has a mini arc before the final one becaue i have to prepare stuff.
4yr
Commonnerfer
CommonnerferAuthor

To be honest when it comes to comedy i dont know if i will ever surpass that book.

Cameron_Baxley:ok I was just wondering and I thought it was a good and interesting book and extremely entertaining.
4yr
SD_Liv
SD_LivLv4

Harem? as far as I remember this genre was not here

4yr
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Nick_Valentine
Nick_ValentineLv2

I like this penny girl? What model synth is she? Overall great story, a bit yuri but as long as it’s not Yaoi I can live. Can’t wait for more.

5yr

NineTailsOfTheVoid
NineTailsOfTheVoidLv12

Things are going fast, all I know is that the MC was once a dead man, now he is a Saiyan woman who falls into a world that I know nothing about, he asks the first person he knows to teach him how to use his scythe, and now they compare it to '' Ruby '' in almost everything

4yr
WolfSpatial
WolfSpatialLv12

This was such a good book... until it became a harem. I cant stand harems, and I dont understand everyone elses obsession with them either. Anyway, if you’re into harems, this book is for you, but if you dont hate yourself, read something else.

4yr
Shaska
ShaskaLv3

I can't get past chapter 2, it's all very confusing, the author doesn't explain anything or why he reincarnated or where he was, or even who the people from the first chapter were ...

3yr
Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6

Thanks for the good work sensei !😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

5yr
PhantomOfNyx
PhantomOfNyxLv14

I'm going a neutral review. I didn't last very long in the story for several reasons. I understand that this is fanfiction and I'm not far enough to judge the raw writing material however it seems to be updated regylarly but the series starts out from the get go with the requirement of you having knowledge of the following series dragonball z and all it includes fallout the fallout game universe and the games mechanics Ruby another successfull anime i personally haven't watched and what it includes. I suspect there is a few i might have missed but without prior knowledge of the following series will you as a reader be hopelessly lost in regards to what is going on, as it is not explained but is assumed you already know everything that is required to be known. I wish the author best of luck with the series and I will likely try to give it another shot if I ever get around to watching ruwby and try to update my review around it. so the tldr from my perspective do I recommend you skip this or seek out all the prior series and attain the knowledge required to enjoy it before you engage with this novel. if you do have the prior series under your belt do I think it is worth giving a shot.

4yr
Eternal_Ouroboros
Eternal_OuroborosLv13

Reveal spoiler

5yr
lnsomniac_
lnsomniac_Lv4

Why does this have a Harry Potter tag???ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

2yr
Grafian
GrafianLv14

I remember long, long ago (read; this morning) when I started reading this story I was thinking about dropping it. The first... four or so(?) chapters were rough and tough to get into, but man I'm at 122 now and I feel like a wise oji-san when looking back at my younger and more foolish self for ever even considering dropping this amazing fic!

4yr
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