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2020-05-07 18:16

I rarly give out reviews and good ones at that but here we go. This novel is just awesome in every sense of the word. the only problems it has is I NEED 100 chaps every day smh. lol anyway, I believe the MC is what can either kill a novel or save it, and author's perseption of a madara uchiha who is turning a new leaf is very spot on, in fact it make sense and doesnt leave u with the usual irritating questions. Madara's personality is still there his badassness never left, and you wont even think its someone else which is a good thing (at least for me) he is just basically trying to good (in his own madara ways) but nevertheless good. as for side characters, they are real like, with their own personalities and not like some robots that are only mentioned when they in the scene. the world background is also very enjoable and understandable. Character development is also steady, not too rushed and not to slow. over all I give this novel a very well deserved 5/5/ I hope author doesnt rush in the story too much as it would leave possible plot holes or dent marks on the story, also to keep the character development of all the characters steady but never rushed.

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Thank you very much! This sort of review is what keeps me going.... Faito!

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Author here, an entire year later... I know, took a while. First of all, I must apologize to everyone that supported my story, and to all the friends I made during that time. This last year was full of ups and downs, and I learned a lot of things, made a lot of mistakes, as well as learned a great deal of lessons. I now feel like it's the time to sit down and put pen to paper once again. I re-read my story over the last few days, trying to catch up with everything before picking it back up. I noted some mistakes and things that I would've rather changed. I'll list some below. If you're a new reader, this may contain spoilers, so proceed at your own risk. - The pace of the story is fast... Very fast. I suppose that with short chapters, I wanted to get through content faster and keep you guys' attentions. Although its not exactly a bad thing, I would've preferred if some arcs, like the land of tea, had a little more to them and were more developed. - Although Jun is Madara, I sort of used this as an excuse to make him stronger at a very fast pace. He is MEANT to be strong, don't get me wrong, but I would've preferred it if he struggled more against some opponents (namely Kakuzu and some others.) - Akane, Kushina, and some other minor characters. While focusing on Madara, I realize I neglected these side-characters that either didn't appear enough, or just were skimmed over. Kushina will get some more of my attention in the future, so all of you fanboys, rest assured. ------ Alright, that marks the end of my self-reflection. It is but a small amount of my worries, but I'm going to spend the next few weeks tying up loose ends in my mind, strengthening the plot for the following arcs, and developing characters as well as the world around them. I'm going to make sure that once GOTU comes back, it comes back much better. As for the chapter length, expect around 2 chapters a day, 1000 words each. Its less releases a day, but overall, more content. The pace will probably be slower, so please look forward to it. As for WHEN I'm coming back? I just finished the re-read and am getting to planning. I will make sure to come back in at most a week or two, so yeah. Let's hope for the best. Anyways, thank you for listening to this author here. I also thank you all for still supporting the book and awaiting my return. Stay safe, and have a good one, - T0X1N.

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