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BalancedSelfInsertLv45yr
2020-04-13 10:42

Honestly, Toxin has always been a great author in the Naruto fanfiction community, but this story takes him to new heights. Theres no Gamer system, theres no Number crunching, and no weird every 5 seconds comparing powerlevels. As Readers we don't need to worry about that. Why? Hes Madara fucking Uchiha, the dude that made himself a God, who has the highest level of technical skill in the verse straight up. We have no worries of 'Oh god, does this OC Gaara have more chakra?' Or, goddamnit why is Fugaku and this OC so strong? We just gotta watch Madara be Madara. I would be greatly enthused to see similar style of stories from him aswell. Mu? Hiruzen? Tobirama? Rasa? Kisame? Indra? Ashura? These and more would be so interesting, and yet no one dies it, and yet Toxin and his talent makes me excited for future prospects.

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T0X1N
T0X1NAuthor

I'm so glad that you like this premise as much as I do... When I came up with it, I was like: What? Why has no one done this before? The only ones I could find where Madara reincarnated were all love stories with some other dude... Not my thing. Anyways, thank you for the support. I read all of the reviews and comments, so don't hesitate to reach out! I might just respond like I am now. Have a good day!

FangMing
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I just have one question. If you plan to do a romance for Madara, will it be harem or not? This question is important to me when adding a story to my library. For reference, I don't like harem. I hate the Harem.

T0X1N:I'm so glad that you like this premise as much as I do... When I came up with it, I was like: What? Why has no one done this before? The only ones I could find where Madara reincarnated were all love stories with some other dude... Not my thing. Anyways, thank you for the support. I read all of the reviews and comments, so don't hesitate to reach out! I might just respond like I am now. Have a good day!
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T0X1N
T0X1NAuthor

Author here, an entire year later... I know, took a while. First of all, I must apologize to everyone that supported my story, and to all the friends I made during that time. This last year was full of ups and downs, and I learned a lot of things, made a lot of mistakes, as well as learned a great deal of lessons. I now feel like it's the time to sit down and put pen to paper once again. I re-read my story over the last few days, trying to catch up with everything before picking it back up. I noted some mistakes and things that I would've rather changed. I'll list some below. If you're a new reader, this may contain spoilers, so proceed at your own risk. - The pace of the story is fast... Very fast. I suppose that with short chapters, I wanted to get through content faster and keep you guys' attentions. Although its not exactly a bad thing, I would've preferred if some arcs, like the land of tea, had a little more to them and were more developed. - Although Jun is Madara, I sort of used this as an excuse to make him stronger at a very fast pace. He is MEANT to be strong, don't get me wrong, but I would've preferred it if he struggled more against some opponents (namely Kakuzu and some others.) - Akane, Kushina, and some other minor characters. While focusing on Madara, I realize I neglected these side-characters that either didn't appear enough, or just were skimmed over. Kushina will get some more of my attention in the future, so all of you fanboys, rest assured. ------ Alright, that marks the end of my self-reflection. It is but a small amount of my worries, but I'm going to spend the next few weeks tying up loose ends in my mind, strengthening the plot for the following arcs, and developing characters as well as the world around them. I'm going to make sure that once GOTU comes back, it comes back much better. As for the chapter length, expect around 2 chapters a day, 1000 words each. Its less releases a day, but overall, more content. The pace will probably be slower, so please look forward to it. As for WHEN I'm coming back? I just finished the re-read and am getting to planning. I will make sure to come back in at most a week or two, so yeah. Let's hope for the best. Anyways, thank you for listening to this author here. I also thank you all for still supporting the book and awaiting my return. Stay safe, and have a good one, - T0X1N.

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