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Moxie
MoxieLv34yr
2020-04-02 07:31

This book is you best so far, T0X1N. Keep up the good work! Also, please make a new girl character for the MC’s team, UwU with a big chest please

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DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14

Question: Any romance? Because tbh, a novel solely focused on combat... Tends to get bland after a while... And I'd rather not read it, get addicted, before getting disappointed, and finally drop...

DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14

Kinda like how I did for LHP... The constant love cycle seemed endless where Zhang Xuan attracted girls but solely focused on a girl and ignoring the rest while constantly getting into repetitive fights with someone stronger, only to have some "miracle" to boost himself or escape from danger...

DaoOfCulture:Question: Any romance? Because tbh, a novel solely focused on combat... Tends to get bland after a while... And I'd rather not read it, get addicted, before getting disappointed, and finally drop...
Spacewarrior17
Spacewarrior17Lv10

Yeah, That library of heavens path😣, sadly i also have to quite that thing. The world development is very good but that repetitive circumstances of face slapping and author's long paragraph to State the situation made that kinda boring to study. But still the novel has very high potential to grow. I would like to read there Manga when it comes.

DaoOfCulture:Kinda like how I did for LHP... The constant love cycle seemed endless where Zhang Xuan attracted girls but solely focused on a girl and ignoring the rest while constantly getting into repetitive fights with someone stronger, only to have some "miracle" to boost himself or escape from danger...
Tarou
TarouLv4

I WANT A LOLI NIGGAAAAAA

LostThe50_50
LostThe50_50Lv6

....arent you the dude in one of the novels comment section....that wants to reincarnate in............. BOKU NO PICO?........

Tarou:I WANT A LOLI NIGGAAAAAA
Tarou
TarouLv4

I have many fetishes that should not exist, I’m sorry.

LostThe50_50:....arent you the dude in one of the novels comment section....that wants to reincarnate in............. BOKU NO PICO?........
NelisPurrrrrs
NelisPurrrrrsLv2

Because we need a someone with 'character'. But i'd drop this if the author did that.

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T0X1N
T0X1NAuthor

Author here, an entire year later... I know, took a while. First of all, I must apologize to everyone that supported my story, and to all the friends I made during that time. This last year was full of ups and downs, and I learned a lot of things, made a lot of mistakes, as well as learned a great deal of lessons. I now feel like it's the time to sit down and put pen to paper once again. I re-read my story over the last few days, trying to catch up with everything before picking it back up. I noted some mistakes and things that I would've rather changed. I'll list some below. If you're a new reader, this may contain spoilers, so proceed at your own risk. - The pace of the story is fast... Very fast. I suppose that with short chapters, I wanted to get through content faster and keep you guys' attentions. Although its not exactly a bad thing, I would've preferred if some arcs, like the land of tea, had a little more to them and were more developed. - Although Jun is Madara, I sort of used this as an excuse to make him stronger at a very fast pace. He is MEANT to be strong, don't get me wrong, but I would've preferred it if he struggled more against some opponents (namely Kakuzu and some others.) - Akane, Kushina, and some other minor characters. While focusing on Madara, I realize I neglected these side-characters that either didn't appear enough, or just were skimmed over. Kushina will get some more of my attention in the future, so all of you fanboys, rest assured. ------ Alright, that marks the end of my self-reflection. It is but a small amount of my worries, but I'm going to spend the next few weeks tying up loose ends in my mind, strengthening the plot for the following arcs, and developing characters as well as the world around them. I'm going to make sure that once GOTU comes back, it comes back much better. As for the chapter length, expect around 2 chapters a day, 1000 words each. Its less releases a day, but overall, more content. The pace will probably be slower, so please look forward to it. As for WHEN I'm coming back? I just finished the re-read and am getting to planning. I will make sure to come back in at most a week or two, so yeah. Let's hope for the best. Anyways, thank you for listening to this author here. I also thank you all for still supporting the book and awaiting my return. Stay safe, and have a good one, - T0X1N.

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