Ok, so I'll write a self-critic for new readers to see. I have to admit that my story, especially in the first few chapters, has a heavy Xianxia influence, but not in a bad way. Up until now, I haven't received a single complaint about that, just that some people find it weird. The chapters are short. As this is my side-project, I took the liberty of writing 600-word chapters, to give me more creative freedom and to have more motivation to edit them once they're finished. Then again, with my current three-chapters-a-day release rate, it should be negligible. Anyways, that's all I have to say for anyone new. If you decide to read it, I hope you enjoy it even half as much as I enjoy writing it! -Oh, and Madara is not a pedo, take that as you may. Peace!

This book is you best so far, T0X1N. Keep up the good work! Also, please make a new girl character for the MC’s team, UwU with a big chest please

This author knows, appreciates and loves the original. I like it. I'm interested in the details of his story. He makes neat and competent moves in the development of history. It's also nice that the author is able to risk and expand my understanding of the Chakra world. It's funny, it's interesting, it's done with regard and respect for the original. 4.8 and Good luck, T0XIN.

Love it! like it! hate it that you don't prioritize this and yes! this is by far the best among the two fan-fic that you wrote ..........................................................................................................................................

Honestly, Toxin has always been a great author in the Naruto fanfiction community, but this story takes him to new heights. Theres no Gamer system, theres no Number crunching, and no weird every 5 seconds comparing powerlevels. As Readers we don't need to worry about that. Why? Hes Madara fucking Uchiha, the dude that made himself a God, who has the highest level of technical skill in the verse straight up. We have no worries of 'Oh god, does this OC Gaara have more chakra?' Or, goddamnit why is Fugaku and this OC so strong? We just gotta watch Madara be Madara. I would be greatly enthused to see similar style of stories from him aswell. Mu? Hiruzen? Tobirama? Rasa? Kisame? Indra? Ashura? These and more would be so interesting, and yet no one dies it, and yet Toxin and his talent makes me excited for future prospects.

Writing quality is good Stable updates Story development was good Character design is okay for OOC's Madara here is ooc, if you are expecting the experienced cool bad ass shinobi with plans and schemes, then you won't find him here as of c130. He is nerfed here not in terms of power since he transmigrated to another body and can get it all back but his intellect and cunning mind, from a genius to a regular prodigy. Years worth of experience and knowledge will barely be used. Plot holes can be easily ignored in some areas and forgotten and does not get in the way of the story as of c130. All in all a good au story with a Madara lite with 80% OOC'ness.

'Ghost of Uchiha' has a great premise, Madra reborn as a more open minded individual. Unfortunately the chapters are tiny likely only a page long. The village isn't given much detail either. I certainly enjoyed the story at first but soon became frustrated at chapter length lack of dialogue, and unbelievable character growth.

It’s just good stuff. Madara’s character is really well done and the author handles his power level really well also so that’s a plus. So far, the supporting cast also seems pretty solid as well, which is pretty rare in fanfics where the Mx is basically a one man army

So your thinking about what this novel is about, and here's your answer:This is not a novel but a journey, of one of the strongest characters in the world of Shinobi namely Madara Uchiha, the story takes us through another perspective of what will happen if this legendary man were to be given a second chance. Join this journey as you'll see whats going on in this legendary man's mind and what will he do when faced with the same problems we all know about, how will the story be effected im sure chaos will begin very soon in his conquest. This novel has a great amount of potential make sure to give this a chance