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Johnnybreeds
JohnnybreedsLv15yr
2020-04-25 00:58

'Ghost of Uchiha' has a great premise, Madra reborn as a more open minded individual. Unfortunately the chapters are tiny likely only a page long. The village isn't given much detail either. I certainly enjoyed the story at first but soon became frustrated at chapter length lack of dialogue, and unbelievable character growth.

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T0X1N
T0X1NAuthor

Thanks for the constructive criticism. Finally, I receive a review which I can use to work on bettering the novel. I'll make sure to put some more emphasis on the village from now on. As for the unbelievable character growth, it was bound to happen with 'Madara Uchiha' being reborn. With his knowledge and experience, you expect him to be weak?

Victor_Weismann
Victor_WeismannLv4

I agree the chapters are very short, the chapters seem to have 600 words, this is very short even for a Fanfic. I think he does this to keep us updated, but it is a good strategy, I also realize that several authors are copying this way of writing from him.

7sins_Lord
7sins_LordLv10

open minded to what? does he still have the same dream just going about it different, or is he just the generic ruthless guy that has to get stronger and everything will just fall in to place.

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T0X1N
T0X1NAuthor

Author here, an entire year later... I know, took a while. First of all, I must apologize to everyone that supported my story, and to all the friends I made during that time. This last year was full of ups and downs, and I learned a lot of things, made a lot of mistakes, as well as learned a great deal of lessons. I now feel like it's the time to sit down and put pen to paper once again. I re-read my story over the last few days, trying to catch up with everything before picking it back up. I noted some mistakes and things that I would've rather changed. I'll list some below. If you're a new reader, this may contain spoilers, so proceed at your own risk. - The pace of the story is fast... Very fast. I suppose that with short chapters, I wanted to get through content faster and keep you guys' attentions. Although its not exactly a bad thing, I would've preferred if some arcs, like the land of tea, had a little more to them and were more developed. - Although Jun is Madara, I sort of used this as an excuse to make him stronger at a very fast pace. He is MEANT to be strong, don't get me wrong, but I would've preferred it if he struggled more against some opponents (namely Kakuzu and some others.) - Akane, Kushina, and some other minor characters. While focusing on Madara, I realize I neglected these side-characters that either didn't appear enough, or just were skimmed over. Kushina will get some more of my attention in the future, so all of you fanboys, rest assured. ------ Alright, that marks the end of my self-reflection. It is but a small amount of my worries, but I'm going to spend the next few weeks tying up loose ends in my mind, strengthening the plot for the following arcs, and developing characters as well as the world around them. I'm going to make sure that once GOTU comes back, it comes back much better. As for the chapter length, expect around 2 chapters a day, 1000 words each. Its less releases a day, but overall, more content. The pace will probably be slower, so please look forward to it. As for WHEN I'm coming back? I just finished the re-read and am getting to planning. I will make sure to come back in at most a week or two, so yeah. Let's hope for the best. Anyways, thank you for listening to this author here. I also thank you all for still supporting the book and awaiting my return. Stay safe, and have a good one, - T0X1N.

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