'Ghost of Uchiha' has a great premise, Madra reborn as a more open minded individual. Unfortunately the chapters are tiny likely only a page long. The village isn't given much detail either. I certainly enjoyed the story at first but soon became frustrated at chapter length lack of dialogue, and unbelievable character growth.
Thanks for the constructive criticism. Finally, I receive a review which I can use to work on bettering the novel.
I'll make sure to put some more emphasis on the village from now on. As for the unbelievable character growth, it was bound to happen with 'Madara Uchiha' being reborn. With his knowledge and experience, you expect him to be weak?
Victor_WeismannLv4
I agree the chapters are very short, the chapters seem to have 600 words, this is very short even for a Fanfic.
I think he does this to keep us updated, but it is a good strategy, I also realize that several authors are copying this way of writing from him.
7sins_LordLv10
open minded to what? does he still have the same dream just going about it different, or is he just the generic ruthless guy that has to get stronger and everything will just fall in to place.