Tarou

Quick

One of the few ASOIAF fanfics I love and I’m enjoying this a lot so far. I’m sincerely hoping that you don’t nerf the MC’s abilities - but if you are going to, make it believable at least.

A blatant self-insert wish-fulfilment fanfic — wrought with irrelevant text and dialogue that is implemented solely for the goal of increasing word count. Spelling mistakes is kept to a bare minimum, although some inaccuracies can be observed. Grammar needs to be optimised, but not uncommon amongst Akikan’s former work. Rey Skywalker, from the recent Star Wars continuation, has more character development than all of these characters combined. Although the girls have their original personalities, all of them strangely develop romantic feelings for the MC for no apparent reason, other than he is ‘charismatic but perverted’, or to further promote the reader to skim through the chapters searching for NSFW lemons. I had thought that the main character had a somewhat ‘John Wick’-esque persona, but subverts any expectations of him interpreting the situation as seriously as you’d think he would. This is a far-cry from some of Akikan’s prior fanfics.

My disappointment is immeasurable, and my day is now ruined.

Prime example of a skim reader

Milk for the Milk God!

I’m gonna be 30 by the time you finish this fanfic

But dragons in GoT don’t have gender they just breed… ah well no use in thinking about it now