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Arcanity
ArcanityLv44yr
2020-03-26 13:42

Alrighty, so before I begin this review is written at chapter 10 so things may change in the future but for now all I can say is great start. Since their isn't a whole lot I can go into without spoilers at this point I'll just list some pros and cons Pros: Fun characters Good comedy Easy to read and understand (good grammar) Good "Culture" and "Plot" Cons: The world is kinda shallow for now While I appreciate the rapid time skips to *****hood I feel that the later skips cost some character development possibilities. Honestly there isn't a whole lot to review yet and the only reason I am is because I want to encourage the author to continue writing the story. There is potential here and I want to see where it goes.

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LegendaryChaos
LegendaryChaosAuthor

Thanks and I will try to flesh out some more of the world and character development.

spectra_phantom
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