LegendaryChaos

Thought Eddie and Iris aren't supposed to know?

Racism?

America did have some of these movements too. But since it fiction, just assume these movements didn't happen.

It not about the no kill rule, but was there a real need to kill them? Yes, they weren't good people, but violent people. Wouldn't it be better just to break their bones and toss them into a cell to be toys for others?

He does this, he does that, he ate this, he ate in this direction. It reads more like a todo list or what done for the day, then a story. While there needs to be description of what is happening, there is a thing of overdoing the details. Instead of just putting "He" for the mc for everything, just write his name as most of this story is in 3rd person. We also don't need, "He stood at the table for a long..." to "Then he sat down. He pulled..." Instead it could be, "He stood at the table for a long moment, before he sat down." Also don't start nearly every sentence with the same word.

It when they reject their magic strongly is when they turn. Not learning magic won’t turn them.

Sigh, Homelander Superman again.

Clark is a bit too wishy washy for his age, while David is the more extreme side.

Does he own marvel in this universe?