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Seud
SeudLv44yr
2020-06-06 02:37

The story was good for awhile but it just became stale, the same things happening over and over. Such as threatening and stealing others women, which I have no problem with. It’s just that there’s no actual fighting since no one can contend with Azure. All I can say about the mc is that he’s a pompous brat with too much power and an ego bigger than the omniverse. In the story things are just thrown around and nothing seems fleshed out or really has a purpose, only rarely does Azures actions have a purpose and it’s mostly for women. I mean the author even tried incorporating the megalodon movie into the story because the story was becoming stale. How does a big shark do anything to liven up the story when the story was already stale with Dragon Gods and literal Gods in it already? For those reasons I’ve dropped the story and recommend others to not bother reading it.

Magic God of DxD

LegendaryChaos
4.3
72 Chs

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spectra_phantom
spectra_phantomLv4

If you're interested in the bakugan, someone wrote a fanfic about the bakugan and it made me feel very nostalgic. The fanfic is called "bakugan: rise of the half bakugan", if you have time, I would appreciate it if you could take a look and write your personal opinions in the comments. they are called authors, but their articles do not stand out because there is not much interaction. I'm a writer too, so I'm posting some fanfictions with comments so you can feel better. I am writing this message because I am afraid that if he feels that what he has written is not taken into account, he will leave. If you enjoy this fanfic like me, you will make me very happy if you direct others to this fanfic. Thanks if you've read this far. (and my english is not very good so sorry for the typos.)

3yr
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Peace12345
Peace12345Lv5

I liked the premise and was looking forward to how he made the girls fall for him since he is essentially invincible and I love OP MC's. But then the author ruined it by forcefully taming girls like catching Pokemon and essentially made them his slaves. I could not read anymore after he did this twice.

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No_Name_desu
No_Name_desuLv4

Busty maid??? I see.... 5 *..... ah, and..... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls.... don't add gender bender pls....

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jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5

he must have grayfia in his harem of servants, then yasaka and etc. .................................................................................................................................................

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topak
topakLv14

Got bored reading this , i read a lot of harem fanfic but this one ,it’s bored me too much, no progress at all, mc’s unlikable ,rinse n repeat get maid and get fked, it’s like Chinese novel

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Alayashiki
AlayashikiLv5

10/10 for having a maid fetish and not having the over generic BS system wish and sharingan.....Again, Maid harem FOR THE WIN by the way....

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PUJIT_FADTE_9415
PUJIT_FADTE_9415Lv3

I WOULD REQUEST THE AUTHOR TO CONTINUE WRITING THIS FAN FIC COZ IT'S REALLY GOOD NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Sage_HiddenBear
Sage_HiddenBearLv6

Seemed interesting at first. I found some early moments that I wasnt crazy with but still kept readung. By chapter 50 I can honestly say its lackluster. MC who wants so much but doesnt really care for others nor does he really use what he has effectively either. Its an ok fanfiction of a harem story and a slice of life OP story. It doesnt really do either genre justice and is really just a power wank without any real progression of plot. Just grab her, then her, ooo i have a dungeon, and lets grab her. Now he doesnt grab a might massive harem or anything but those he chooses he seems to not cherish much at all. Bottom line, its an ok read and I feel the author could improve the story by creating actual character development, doesnt have to be some big tragedy but simple things like more introspective moments and realizations of behavior attempts at change and or cherishing his family more, etc. Just give it some thought. Good luck!

4yr
Aaron_Seddon_0599
Aaron_Seddon_0599Lv14

the character is a complete dick and there is no proper character development----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

4yr
Sommerscave
SommerscaveLv15

Thanks for the hard work 🙏 I need to thank you for reminding me about Ex Hero OP from Level 2’s System. It made me get back the inspiration to write. Thanks 🙏

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