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Sangabriel
SangabrielLv54yr
2020-07-09 18:11

It started okay, but it has became ridiculous. 1st. The power classification, is sloppy at best, instead of S,A,B or C class Magicians it should be talent or something like that, we dont have a clear distintion of power with the characters. 2nd. The "civil war" development is really bad, at least at my eyes. Goverment useless, ok, 3 main familys, where we have 1 which power is mainly about an S rank Magician that's almost dead, and it's alive only because of medicine, that has fought with the MC for something like 5 minutes and it's already puking blood. The second family, the kudo, almost got their heiress killed but are like, well ok, it has nothing to do with us or something, the family with the best weapons in the country it's the most useless, or atleast that's what the author is making me believe. and the third family has their heir, really away from them without apparent reason. And the 3rd. We have a Sound magician, that for what my limited understanding it's basically controlling vibrations, and we dont have a magic about a vibration sword or that he's unable to feel the monsters underground??? it's a bit weird for me, but ok, this one is more me complaining that another thing.

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dedicatedblob
dedicatedblobLv5

The mc is so weak compared to how the author portrays him. After his abilities are revealed, he is still the useless guy without any offensive magic. Which is weird, cause who seriously creates a suicide attack before creating a normal attack? There is no way that happens. He even has time to continue creating more skills before creating a normal attack. I feel the mc is an unrealistic sham. He is even in a 2 relationships but refuses to show either of these girls any sort of affection. To the point of treating one like a nuisance. It's so weird.

AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

That's the main issue I have with this story. The author portrayed him as OP at the start but as time went on he seemed weaker and weaker. MC is also super unmotivated because he is happy with his current life. Only wanting to make some achievements in order to live a comfortable life. So he is unwilling to put in the effort to become strong. Even though he knows there are people that literally want him and his sister dead.

dedicatedblob:The mc is so weak compared to how the author portrays him. After his abilities are revealed, he is still the useless guy without any offensive magic. Which is weird, cause who seriously creates a suicide attack before creating a normal attack? There is no way that happens. He even has time to continue creating more skills before creating a normal attack. I feel the mc is an unrealistic sham. He is even in a 2 relationships but refuses to show either of these girls any sort of affection. To the point of treating one like a nuisance. It's so weird.
Gutless_Hero_3
Gutless_Hero_3Lv1

ok.. this is the last straw, I'm out. thanks for the warning bro

AsianLadyBoy:That's the main issue I have with this story. The author portrayed him as OP at the start but as time went on he seemed weaker and weaker. MC is also super unmotivated because he is happy with his current life. Only wanting to make some achievements in order to live a comfortable life. So he is unwilling to put in the effort to become strong. Even though he knows there are people that literally want him and his sister dead.
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Fixten
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I will give you my own version of pros and cons. You could check it yourself whether you are okay with the story or not. Don’t throw a rant if it is not your cup of tea, and everyone has their own preferences (You might hate a particular scene and remember that others might not). I will start with the cons first and save for the best. Cons: 1.Harem (I know that some might prefer this, and some might not. I will warn you here first if you haven’t checked the tag.) 2.MC might be dragged away by others at first. But he will slowly change as the story progresses and revolves around him. 3.Fewer releases. I am focusing on my main novel, but I will try to do a daily update. 4. I do research the materials before writing it. But it might still not be right, so feel free to tell me If I make it wrong. 5. Just saying, there might be some change in the story as the story goes on. I tried to outline how the story will go. But as the story progresses, I will certainly find that some of my original plots are not usable anymore and need to make new plots. So, there might be some points in this review that might be unusable anymore. Pros: 1. In the modern world, it might give you a better image to imagine the scene. 2. I love writing universal names. If you read the early chapter, you will find many names from other countries. I love making those names instead of naming all the people with one country’s style or a neutral name. (Not insulting others here, so peace.) 3. Powerful MC (?) with some hidden powers that will be revealed from time to time. The same applies to the world itself. 4. Harem (As I said before, it might become pros or cons according to own preferences.) 5. Not going to be a long story, but yeah, considering the length, it is certainly not a short one either. From my prediction, it is around 400 chapters. Might be lower or higher. Additional Info: 1. Chapter length: 1600-1800 words, might be longer. 2. Not a Native English speaker, so my English might burn you. I am trying to improve too, and if you find any mistakes, do tell me so I could fix it. 3. I am open to discussion, so feel free to tell me if I make mistakes or something. You can reply to ‘my’ chapter comments or this review as it is easier to find and read it. 4. It is a fantasy. Some of your logic might not be working in this world. Anyway, I won’t make it longer than this and keep you busy reading this review. If you like the story, please SMASH that vote button and considers adding this story to your collection.

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