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applepie96
applepie96Lv44yr
2020-07-04 13:17

I like the main characters and powers, however the world itself just feels off to me. Like there is more to be desired. Feels like there are very few powerful people and most of them just happen to be on the "evil side." The worlds population is said to be very low so it's very strange that Humans would infight and kill powerful individuals with high ranking skills so easily. The main motivation of the "evil side" is to reclaim the United Asia as Japan once again. Not sure how that's good for humanity lol. I also feel like there's no structure for leveling up and cultivating besides reading from magic books or creating your own skills. Tldr; The world in this story doesn't make sense to me.

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TheCityCouncil
TheCityCouncilLv15

Yeah, changing United Asia back to japan makes little sense especially in the light of it being a few centuries since it was changed... not to mention needing to get rid of half the country’s military power (+2 out of 3 S tankers), a fight which will further reduce the amount of surviving population. The likely result is that the whole country will be overrun by crabs now that the defenses are lacking.

Black_Asura
Black_AsuraLv4

thank God I steered clear of it b/c it had the harem tag.

Antony_Engambe
Antony_EngambeLv3

I'm impressed by the mc and I want to know more about this world and leo

Antony_Engambe
Antony_EngambeLv3

and United asia will be destroyed

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lol_my_lol_36
lol_my_lol_36Lv2

the story is good

AaNnNnAaLlIiNn
AaNnNnAaLlIiNnLv4

same

Buldulin
BuldulinLv4

if you realy hate harem then ok but if you are ok with it Its so good

Black_Asura:thank God I steered clear of it b/c it had the harem tag.
gomez_gamerz
gomez_gamerzLv11

do you guys have a comic version

MonsterThouxan
MonsterThouxanLv4

I dont think people hate the harem tag just because its harem its because most authors just mess it up

Buldulin:if you realy hate harem then ok but if you are ok with it Its so good
Prince_Jae_Nim
Prince_Jae_NimLv2

The hero in the story is incredibly strong

Rine_Quill
Rine_QuillLv11

Nice

Jona_Jona_8922
Jona_Jona_8922Lv1

hi

tyler_landrum
tyler_landrumLv11

amazing novel love the mc

Jigjig_Tulio
Jigjig_TulioLv3

ut interesting

raktim
raktimLv5

yeah in many novel's the harem is just bullshit but there are some in which the harem part is done nicely. Anyway i read all novel's except where the heroine is annoying or the mc which lets other people take advantage of him.

MonsterThouxan:I dont think people hate the harem tag just because its harem its because most authors just mess it up
Sakusei
SakuseiLv4

You're right, who wouldn't want many girls to fall in love with you. But then again, if it's guys/girls that are loyal to their counterparts are the ones reading it. It leaves a bad taste, I'm fine with the harem genre but personally I like normal romance more

MonsterThouxan:I dont think people hate the harem tag just because its harem its because most authors just mess it up
shadowalker367
shadowalker367Lv1

awesome . waiting for the next chapter

neerza_5062
neerza_5062Lv13

Did someone say Family:

Pyro_Frost_620
Pyro_Frost_620Lv10

For some reason I like your all 3 novels I like it bro Keep up with good work 😉

Neil_Kross
Neil_KrossLv3

I will wait for your new novel

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Fixten
FixtenAuthor

I will give you my own version of pros and cons. You could check it yourself whether you are okay with the story or not. Don’t throw a rant if it is not your cup of tea, and everyone has their own preferences (You might hate a particular scene and remember that others might not). I will start with the cons first and save for the best. Cons: 1.Harem (I know that some might prefer this, and some might not. I will warn you here first if you haven’t checked the tag.) 2.MC might be dragged away by others at first. But he will slowly change as the story progresses and revolves around him. 3.Fewer releases. I am focusing on my main novel, but I will try to do a daily update. 4. I do research the materials before writing it. But it might still not be right, so feel free to tell me If I make it wrong. 5. Just saying, there might be some change in the story as the story goes on. I tried to outline how the story will go. But as the story progresses, I will certainly find that some of my original plots are not usable anymore and need to make new plots. So, there might be some points in this review that might be unusable anymore. Pros: 1. In the modern world, it might give you a better image to imagine the scene. 2. I love writing universal names. If you read the early chapter, you will find many names from other countries. I love making those names instead of naming all the people with one country’s style or a neutral name. (Not insulting others here, so peace.) 3. Powerful MC (?) with some hidden powers that will be revealed from time to time. The same applies to the world itself. 4. Harem (As I said before, it might become pros or cons according to own preferences.) 5. Not going to be a long story, but yeah, considering the length, it is certainly not a short one either. From my prediction, it is around 400 chapters. Might be lower or higher. Additional Info: 1. Chapter length: 1600-1800 words, might be longer. 2. Not a Native English speaker, so my English might burn you. I am trying to improve too, and if you find any mistakes, do tell me so I could fix it. 3. I am open to discussion, so feel free to tell me if I make mistakes or something. You can reply to ‘my’ chapter comments or this review as it is easier to find and read it. 4. It is a fantasy. Some of your logic might not be working in this world. Anyway, I won’t make it longer than this and keep you busy reading this review. If you like the story, please SMASH that vote button and considers adding this story to your collection.

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