Some parts seem off. The big one is the MC has sound magic and can hear people arguing over a kilometers away; can even hear someone's muscles moving or hear magic being used... Gets snuck up on consecutively fighting monsters that he did not hear. Other than that, how has a government (after what seems to be a couple of generations of magic users- hard to tell, seems like older adults in the story have had magic and adapted weapons for it, but not explicitly said) not learned how to weaponize sound. Weaponizing things is what the government is good at. They were able to figure out sound and space, but not sound. Other than that the characters seem a bit hollow. I know I am only at chapter 20, but they seem strait forward with no twists, just here is their personality they do not really hid their intentions until later, you know right away, they let it show to other characters as soon as the slightest inconvenience to their personal preferences are gone against.
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